BTNPhoenixStrike

[Panda]

It looks confusing, cant really tell that its a phoenix, define the body more so it looks more like one.

 

[San]

It is confusing.

 

[Shar Dundred]

 

[PrinceYaser]

Wherever San goes, Shar follows. Alright you guys, I'll try to update this.
I'll either succeed or fail and delete. XD

 

[Murlocologist]

Do not spam the thread.

Hm.. what's confusing? The proportions are the same as phoenix and can be easily seen, the head, the wings, etc.

What the image you posted has to do with the icon you posted? I suggest you to rather post a larger image of this actual icon and then explain where are all the features you mentioned located.

 

[PrinceYaser]

What the image you posted has to do with the icon you posted?

Well, I posted my acceptable reference to configure with my icon showing the actual shapes.

What the image you posted has to do with the icon you posted? I suggest you to rather post a larger image of this actual icon and then explain where are all the features you mentioned located.

Since this is an ability icon, I don't see any reason to give more details to phoenix. Oo Tail and wings are based upon the reference I've shown. Head is placed/drawn good enough I suppose. So if there is any problem, a detailed review would be appreciated.

 

[Murlocologist]

So if there is any problem, a detailed review would be appreciated.

It is chaotic and undefined. Illustration is not readable, not even in the large image. Foreground and background are blended together with shapes smudged away. Texture is seemingly made by random brushwork. And that certainly does not contribute to either definition or readability of the image.

Define shapes. Don't smudge them and don't merge them with background effect. Colors are ok, but the glow effect around the phoenix should not have same coloring as the phoenix or it should be much less present and more uniformed in the image.

 

[Panda]

It looks just like the phoenix's wings now, not sure if thats what you wanted or was going for.

 

[PrinceYaser]

It looks just like the phoenix's wings now, not sure if thats what you wanted or was going for.

Yep that was intended.

 

[Panda]

Good enough for approval.

 

[Darkfang]

I like the style, I just don't like the fact that 65% of the icon is Background