BTNPaladinABIEvilInside

[Moderator]

12:28, 24th Apr 2015
Apheraz Lucent: About the face, first, the nose has too thick outlines, resulting in it appearing detached from the face. If you wanted to make an angry look, you could add some wrinkles on the forehead, just that one doesn't do much for facial expression or overall feeling of emotion for the character. Also, there's the same problem with outlines on the hair and face part, where the hear is too much secluded from the face and therefore does not look natural. Also, the beard and hair colors should match.

To be honest, I'd rather have you redraw entire icon instead of trying to fix things up, because the idea is great, but you tried to execute it in a way that even experienced people would have troubles making it look effective and artistically right.

 

[Moy]

~Reserved

 

[BLazeKraze]

Nice, but for me it's doesn't looks like he is on "rage" ...

 

[Moy]

Or maybe I'll change the name, it is actually to be titled as "Evil Inside". Well I'll change it to EvilInside

 

[BLazeKraze]

Yes, It's good title, because his eyes is red .. The paladin normally praise the light, but because his heart is full of hatred, the evil personality starts to rise

 

[Moy]

Nice phrase. And thanks for agreeing.

 

[Heinvers]

I don't really quite grasp the face's texture.
It looks as if it's unfinished and ragged as hell, you should add better highlights and shading to it.

I'll also bitch about that hair (yeah I like to be picky on that ;p), needs more work overall.

On top of that I also think that the eye glow should be lessen down a bit, for me it seems too strong (each with his preferences I suppose ).

Good icon though

 

[Moy]

I tripled sharpened it XD

 

[The Panda]

The gray hair flowing away seems too small make it thicker. And, since he's evil maybe a devilish background maybe, too fill that empty space.

 

[Sin'dorei300]

The hair on the left part needs more shading.
Also, the nose could be improved a bit.