BTNOrcWarlock2

[Moderator]

17:51, 14th Jun 2009
zombie2279: Please use more shadings and highlights to achieve a better look. The whole face looks a bit lost too, use some further details.

9:50, 21h Jun 2009
zombie2279: Rejected until at least the face is made more realistic.

 

[JokeMaster]

Comic style...Not bad 4.5/5

 

[Palaslayer]

looks funny ^^

 

[Revolve]

I kind of can only draw cartoon style, don't know if it's positive or negative

Anyway update, check first post.

 

[The Panda]

Warlocks mouth needs a bit more changing around, and also his nose.

 

[Palaslayer]

why do you always write in white??

 

[Zpider]

Similarity

At first glance I thought it was.

Don't they look very similar ?
A suggestion from me to you is to remove those shoulderpads and clean up his face a little.

 

[Revolve]

Hmm yeah guess the face needs some work.

Anyway heres my drawing that I made it from:

(Link http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/pastebin.php?id=njmm3z)

As you can see, it's heavily edited, and were originally not supposed to be an icon ^^ And sorry, won't remove the shoulders ^^

 

[Zombie]

Further details are needed. It looks like wood at some parts, which is bad. A lot more details are needed on both the face and the beard. The cloak on the head also has an altogether weird facing.

 

[Dentothor]

altogether this icon has poor shading and poor facial features. I'd reccomend improving on both

 

[Revolve]

Update

I remade the face completely, 100% new face. Also the hood/cloa´k has been remade, atleast the upper parts, and worked overal on shadings.

 

[krisserz]

It`s good, because it`s funny ^^ I like it. 4/5

 

[Zombie]

The general outlook is still somewhat lacking, altough I can definitely see some improvements made. I'd still recommend reworking the face.