BTNMoonlitGraveyard

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10:01, 20th Apr 2010
Pyramidhe@d: Useful

 

[War_Golum]

Currently use in my map project, like a reincarnation spell only possible during the night.

BIG

 

[Paladon]

Generally nice but it rather appears like a snowball.
Just make it less bright but keep a shiny effect.

 

[Pharaoh_]

I think that's because of the shading, because moon is supposed to be bright. Also, try enlarging the crosses, because they are hardly visible and easy-to-understand in the actual icon.

 

[War_Golum]

I think that's because of the shading, because moon is supposed to be bright. Also, try enlarging the crosses, because they are hardly visible and easy-to-understand in the actual icon.

Yes, the main objective is distace the brightness of the moon.

As the crosses I used the same size as the original Blizzard icon Reincarnation, but if necessary I'll change

 

[Wraithling]

As a moon, this icon isn't bad.

But if you prefer us to see it this icon as a 'moonlit graveyard', then make the crosses more visible/ show more of the land/ move the moon higher etc (you get the drift).

 

[War_Golum]

alright said:
main objective is distace the brightness of the moon =/

 

[Panda]

More graves would be nice overlapping the moon.

 

[13L4M3]

I'd put 2-3 more crosses, beneath the moon.
I realy understand this picture how it's suppost to work, and i realy think it does, awesome work ! 5/5 +rep.

 

[Axarion]

Nice icon but the moon needs much more craters

 

[kola]

yep, looks good but fixe things that people said.

 

[Darkmoon Hero]

Indeed, the above suggestions would be a good improvement. At first I thought it was a pearl, it was so shiny.

 

[War_Golum]

Nice icon but the moon needs much more craters

The craters of the moon can not be seen from Earth without a telescope.

Unfortunately I do not think that should change the number of crosses.
Will change only the brightness of the moon

 

[13L4M3]

Okaysy, icon's concept is still vissible and it's result is awesome.
Already gave you rep for this one :3

 

[terradont]

The craters of the moon can not be seen from Earth without a telescope.

Unfortunately I do not think that should change the number of crosses.
Will change only the brightness of the moon

A little more shadows are visible though:

I think that you should add at least 1 more(bigger) cross or make the current ones bigger. They are hardly visible now, so the cemetary effect is lost. They don't have to bemuch bigger, just a little.

 

[War_Golum]

Not a true picture of the moon ... It's a drawing LoL
Who did the picture could put much of shade wished

 

[terradont]

Who said that it was a real picture?
And who cares if it's a drawing or not, it still shows you that a shining moon isn't plain white.

 

[War_Golum]

The picture is not real.
Funny, when I look at the moon looks nothing like this picture

 

[terradont]

I could say the same about your moon. Fine, it's not like I'm forcing you or anything.

 

[War_Golum]

Rate 3/5, childish attitude .... = /

 

[terradont]

Childish attitude? I don't give 4/5 or 5/5 to icons I don't find deserve it. That's why I wait to rate icons until the author has decided not to make any more changes. To me, this is a 3/5, nothing more.

Learn to take critics, otherwise you will never be able to make something good.

 

[War_Golum]

I never said it would not make more changes ....
I said I'm not changing anything you said, mainly by giving as an example not real picture.

I get very well the criticisms and suggestions provided they have good ideas.

 

[L_Lawliet]

looks like a simple snow ball, golf ball.. define it more.. maybe resize the moon and expose the graveyard.. btw that's a good concept

 

[War_Golum]

alright updated,
read the changelog

 

[Darkmoon Hero]

Last update was a great improvement. I still think the moon is very bright, but it's quite a bit better.

 

[Wraithling]

I like the improvements made

 

[terradont]

The improved version looks much better, good enough to change my rating to a 4/5. I'm still not too fond of the moon, but now that it's smaller the shading looks more appropriate.
It does a good job of visualising the concept now.

 

[HappyCockroach]

Remove the bright outline from the bottom part of the graves. They make no sense, if light is coming from above/behind.