BTNLightBeam

[Moderator]

00:10, 5th Nov 2009
enjoy: It looks more like a sword with a glowing blade, then a light beam. Please try to make it look more like a light beam.

enjoy: Lacks details.

 

[kola]

Full size

New Version.. changed alot of things

 

[The Panda]

Take away the 4 lines coming from the yellow beam, they are useless at the moment. Then keep adding on towards the beam by adding shine effects and twirls and glows.

 

[X-OMG-X]

I would say this is one of your best works. Do as AoP said and it will be wonderful.

 

[Zombie]

Thought it was a sword for the first look. I recommend you define the finger a bit and preferably bring it a bit further into perspective, so it will actually be visible. As for the light effect, it's not a particularly good execution. I suggest you use two better distinguishable colors, like a light yellow in the middle of the beam and a dark orange to make the outer glow. As for the rest, do something with the four lightnings, like remove them or replace them with some particles or another circular particle flow.

 

[kola]

Lol.. ok.. but the color u said me to use will make it rly rly not look like holy... and yeah im going to remove the white stripes.. and ok.. i'll make the color more ''seeable''

New Version...

OMG!! why all my Disbtn Update i make are not Loading...

A TOTALY new Version... a bit like my Holy Light.. but still rly different