BTNHealingWind3

[Moderator]

10:59, 14th Jul 2009
zombie2279: Bring the object more into foreground by adding more correct outlines and add some details to the cross, preferably more colors and decorations.

8:52, 17th Jul 2009
zombie2279: Rejected until updated.

 

[krisserz]

Looks interesting, but is too blurred.

 

[Somnium]

It's meant to be blurred, the sign was drawn and now the wind is taking it's powers. I'll update this soon because i got some ideas

-Somnium

 

[krisserz]

The sign shouldn`t be blurred. It must be visible. The wind looks ok.

 

[Somnium]

Okie, i'll work on it not being blurred. Add some white highlights to the sign maybe ?

Edit: Okie, updated it - made it more visible

-Somnium

 

[Palaslayer]

blurry, but ok.

 

[krisserz]

Now looks better, but I don`t like the fact, that the sign isn`t centered. Anyway looks better than before.

 

[Palaslayer]

well, try making it similar to this:


see what i mean? moar definition.

(nothing good, i made it in some secs, have to go now ^^)

 

[krisserz]

Yea, put more definition on your icon. Palaslayer looks good. Try to improve yours, to make it look better than Palaslayer ;]

 

[Somnium]

Oh now i see what you mean, add like shadows and boundries. Okie i will do that asap but working on another one now

-Somnium

 

[Palaslayer]

if ayou dont hurry, i will redo the icon and upload it ^^

 

[Somnium]

YOu can redo it if you attatch the photoshop file. Would be doss if you filmed it xD i wanna learn xD

Edit: I made it more defined. I hope this is what you wanted. Still feel free to make a redo Pala i wan't to see what it's meant to look like, helps me learn. Actually anyone can feel free to make a redo of any of my Icons, just needs to include a big picture or a PSD file.


Picture like so

-Somnium

 

[Palaslayer]

well, i can only say two things. one comment and another suggestion.

better.
make the shadows and highlights more extrem. partially white and black.

 

[Somnium]

Okie so i did a more extreme shading version like you asked.

Is this better ? I can't be assed updating it all untill you tell me this is better. xD

-Somnium

 

[Palaslayer]

more and make the lines more straight with the normal pencil.

the edges of the ankh are currently kinda random. define them even more. if you want i can make you and example this evening (ofc with another piece).

 

[Somnium]

Yeah okie, you can make me ex example please include the PDS file in it xD It helps alot, well untill them am working on the other icon

Thanks for all the help, i really appreciate it

-Somnium

 

[Palaslayer]

no problem.

 

[Pottum]

reminds me on a Guild Wars Icon x,x xd

 

[Potluck]

erm, i like the concept and the wind looks good.
but i want to mention that i think the outlining and shadows and what-not improve the solidity of the symbol, however some of those wavy lines make it look a bit scratchy, mebe straighten the lines a bit more, i dunno what others think but thats my opinion.

 

[Palaslayer]

http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/icons-541/btnankhofrebirth-135864/

well here it is.

 

[The Panda]

Overall needs better highlighting and effects that i see.

 

[Trillium]

mm, Guild Wars icons =)) keep it on, you have potential, really =)