BTNGourd

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10:21, 27th Apr 2014
Sin'dorei300: Improve the shading, the shape & texture.
Needs more work.

09:46, 4th May 2014
Sin'dorei300: Awaiting update.

17:38, 14th May 2014
Sin'dorei300: What are those ''tentacles'' supposed to be?
And whatever they are, they aren't drawn well.
Also, the gourd still doesn't look like a bag.

12:53, 20th May 2014
Sin'dorei300: Commented.

 

[A Void]

You should add more sand around it kind-of. It looks good. Useful for Naruto themed maps 4/5. I will increase rating once changes are made.

 

[forgottenmeat]

You should add more sand around it kind-of. It looks good. Useful for Naruto themed maps 4/5. I will increase rating once changes are made.

i'm sorry my friend,i can't.. i don't know where to start,
i just made 4 layers on this icon the red/yellow one background is on the 1st layer, including the black background. when i shade another color, the red/yellow background will become dirty

btw, thank you for the compliment +Rep

 

[Deleted member 219079]

Naruto

 

[forgottenmeat]

Naruto

yeah is it good ?

 

[Heinvers]

It is good but it needs proper shading.

 

[forgottenmeat]

It is good but it needs proper shading.

hmmm what part of the icon ?

BTW, thank you +REP

 

[Heinvers]

Here's an example:

Mainly the lower parts.
This is how you could shade it:

 

[forgottenmeat]

Here's an example:

Mainly the lower parts.
This is how you could shade it:

Thank you heinvers ^_^
i've done shading,
this one :

and this one: ^_^

 

[Sin'dorei300]

No offense, but it looks like a tick.
Can u show me ur ref pic?

 

[Marcos DAB]

I don't understand what the icon represents.

 

[Deleted member 219079]

If you watched naruto you'd know

 

[Heinvers]

Yes, Naruto thingy
Anyway, those background lines look like tentacles or something like that. Imo you could fade them a lil', right now they're too strong.

 

[BLazeKraze]

Make this as a reference for better result .

 

[forgottenmeat]

No offense, but it looks like a tick.
Can u show me ur ref pic?

its ok boss ^_^, that's your own vision
hmmm. . do you mean reference ?
i just imagined what it looks like ^_^

If you watched naruto you'd know

Exactly

Make this as a reference for better result .

wow.. thanks ! , i'll try to do that , if i can ^_^
#ImJustABegginer

 

[Heinvers]

Those orange lines still look like tentacles:/

 

[Deleted member 219079]

It's japanese after all

 

[Heinvers]

This is not porn you know:/

 

[Deleted member 219079]

ye it's sand (gaara is the jinchuriki of the sand)

 

[Heinvers]

ye it's sand (gaara is the jinchuriki of the sand)

right then maybe he should shoot sand not hentai tentacles

 

[Deleted member 219079]

that's genius!+rep

 

[BLazeKraze]

I think you should remove the "yelloworange lines" , because it's looks like insect .You must replace it by a glow

 

[forgottenmeat]

I think you should remove the "yelloworange lines" , because it's looks like insect .You must replace it by a glow

can you please give me an example?

 

[759tricker]

Gaara's Gourd ?
first time eh?!
hmmm.. pretty!
5/5 for the effort.

 

[BLazeKraze]

FOr now, It's lack on shading , "Think the source of light , then shade it properly"
It's looks "FLAT" ,

 

[A Void]

You updated it, much better! 5/5

 

[forgottenmeat]

You updated it, much better! 5/5

Thank You, +Rep to you

 

[Sin'dorei300]

Define the sack/gourd better, try giving it an outline, but not with black.

 

[Sin'dorei300]

I don't think the color of the glow is that fitting.
The gourd could use more definition and maybe some fancy effects(with fitting colors...), if the gourd is a magic one.