BTNGoldenSword

[Moderator]

15:26, 19th Apr 2011
enjoy: The sword and the handle looks really monotone, and not really metallic either. I'd suggest you add a glow around it too. The main issue is that the shading and highlights are essentially one color, instead of having a gradual transition.

 

[Banzay89]

PSD file

 

[Marcos DAB]

A little glow would be appreciated.

 

[The Panda]

Make the shading on the darker side of the blade part a little darker, also i would give this some sort of an background.

 

[8512590215848]

add some sort of texture please.

 

[Banzay89]

PeeKay, what do you mean by texture?

Edit by enjoy: Please use English only.

 

[Magtheridon96]

He means you shouldn't just create a sword with one plain color.
It shouldn't be all yellow, you should sort of "Smudge" it a bit
from the inside with several other colors close to the original
color scheme giving it depth and a 3D look

Correct me if I'm wrong - I'm an Icon Nab

 

[8512590215848]

PeeKay, what do you mean by texture?

В смысле добавь текстуру???

в том смысле что рисунок будто сделан в лучших традициях плохого аниме, когда вместо теней и металлических бликов - просто монохромная заливка..

i mean it's looks like designed and realised in best traditions of bad anime, where artists makes plain monochrome fill of shape instead of paint details, textures and shaders.

 

[Banzay89]

PeeKay,

Edit by enjoy: Please use English only.

 

[The Panda]

Um the rules say there is no foreign languages in threads, so English only please. But, yes this needs a texture because with just a flat yellow it looks plain. I would add scratches, swirls, any other effects that come to mind on it..