BTNGoldenSword

[Moderator]

13:33, 17th Oct 2009
enjoy: The background takes the focus of the sword so you might wanna change that. The handle is also to short. It lacks proper highlights, shading. The one half of the blade is just all white, like there is alot of light on it? Maybe make a lighting up background, to show what have caused that. Some of the highlights and shadings are kinda misplaced? Also lacks proper definition. Also the shape of the gold protecter things on the handle, should be fixed.

 

[Orthon]

it doesn't look like a sword and doesn't have 3d effect. Background looks like some kind of threads.

 

[TheHunterKiller]

Your worst one :/. It looks more like a cross or something.
Make the handle more ''handleish'' or something.

 

[X-OMG-X]

Sorry but this one isnt good. You have to work on the shape and make the background more golden and give it a 3d effect. Hope this helps you.

 

[Midnighters]

This one needs a lot of work, such as,

More Shading and Highlights in the correct spot

Defining the shape or the sword

Adding detail to make it look like a sword

And making the background look better.

Do that iand it will look better

 

[kola]

ok... first i dont think i will change the BG cuz it is a rly good one.. And if u though i forgot to do details i said it was a very new style that i was testing... but i see its not good.. i will work onit...

EDIT: k new version... i didnt know what to do for the handle... so i did a kind of Grip... can u guys give me idea... i would like to not hear ''It sucks'' IF you dont give me anyting to change..

EDIT: Argh!!! who gave me 1/5... Didnt even get the time to update it...

EDITL Version 0.3 Darkened the BG

 

[Panda]

Hmm too much going on in the background for one. (Messy) Also, the sword seems like a plastic play sword :/ But, the shading on the blade seems good though! So thats a plus.