BTNGhostMissile3

[Moderator]

12:03, 29th Jul 2009
Hawkwing: Like I said, you brightened the whole thing a bit too much, and whatever changes you made didn't really fix that, but otherwise it's very nice. Keep up the good work!

 

[Narandza]

Very nice but cartoonish. 4/5

 

[breebree123]

narandaza is right,more shading, did you smudge this?
3/5

 

[Marenko]

yeah i work alot with the smudgetool.
i kinda like it because you can get some movement in there with it
+rep

 

[breebree123]

dont ever use smudge, smudge is a like a terror tool. .

 

[dansaDisco]

dont ever use smudge, smudge is a like a terror tool. .

Don't say that. Smudge can look awesome if used correctly.


However, I don't feel like this icon looks.. right.
the "face" of the coil doesn't blend at all, which makes it look very weird D:

 

[a7xpwns3]

so i herd you liek Large X brushes.

Needs more shading, more definition, more color usage.

 

[StaberFire]

so i herd you liek Large X brushes.

Lulz.

I like the fuzzy cartoonish style, but it does need to be a bit more fitting to wc3. It certainly isn't easy to add shading to dust, or energy, or whatever that green stuff is, but try nonetheless.
Just always remember these words of wisdom: "You can never shade something too much."
Untrue but you get the idea. =P

 

[Marenko]

"You can never shade something too much."

yep got the idea and reworked it
thanks for the tips +rep

 

[dansaDisco]

Looks much better, but it doesn't look like a DeathCoil, more like a green-scary-ghost-demon or something xD

 

[StaberFire]

Very nice, much better now.

 

[Moon_assailant]

not the best, was this supposed to b like a ghost? 3.5/5

 

[Deolrin]

Looks pretty nice, I suggest changing the mouth as it doesn't looks quite right :/

 

[Marenko]

not the best, was this supposed to b like a ghost? 3.5/5

yep ghostlooking was what i was aiming for

i kno it doesnt fit a death coil that well but it was supposed to be some kind of a ghost missile or something and the death coil is pretty near to that so i named it death coil

Looks pretty nice, I suggest changing the mouth as it doesn't looks quite right :/

i will see what i can do

 

[The Panda]

More like green ghost, sorry.

 

[Marenko]

More like green ghost, sorry.

yep ghostlooking was what i was aiming for

i know it doesnt fit a death coil that well but it was supposed to be some kind of a ghost missile or something and the death coil is pretty similiar to that so i named it death coil

... read pls
but well ok i rename it

 

[Squidle]

Usefull

+ Good use of smudge
± Cartoonish
- Bit hard to see what's it.

Improvable Things

1) The tooths could be made better.
2) Resize it a bit down, so you could make a tail or something.
3) More shadow would be cool.

You don't have to change the Improvable Things, but it would be better.

 

[supertoinkz]

stop smudge it makes your icon blurry
u can also use smudge when drawing pointy things but remember to duplicate the smudge layer again 3 times to make it harder.

 

[Marenko]

Usefull

+ Good use of smudge
± Cartoonish
yeah i love it that way
- Bit hard to see what's it.
well its a green ghost face, wich you can see pretty good if you ask me oO

Improvable Things

1) The tooths could be made better.
2) Resize it a bit down, so you could make a tail or something.
3) More shadow would be cool.

Mhm yeah the tooths arent that good but if i size it down wouldnt it be harder to see what it is? oO

+rep <3

 

[Squidle]

Mhm yeah the tooths arent that good but if i size it down wouldnt it be harder to see what it is? oO

+rep <3

Maybe the tooths are better if ya make 'em another color?
And if you size it down, you could add some kind of tail...
But it'll be still usefull/able to see what it is.

 

[Marenko]

Maybe the tooths are better if ya make 'em another color?
And if you size it down, you could add some kind of tail...
But it'll be still usefull/able to see what it is.

changes made

 

[Hawkwing]

Don't say that. Smudge can look awesome if used correctly.

QFT. Listen to the man!

 

[Rufus]

Epic!

 

[FUJI]

yeah looks like a bit cartoonish but nvm useful!