BTNFrostmourneWhisper

[Moderator]

15:34, 9th Sep 2012
Apheraz Lucent: Thought the style and representative ideas go great, the icon suffers a lot from an invasion of details, making it quite hard to spot what is what and where is it.

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I3lackDeath Approved [tr]

Date: 2013/Jan/30 18:40:23 Reasons: Might be useful, but please work on your brush strokes. Make them less scattered, less individual. Create coherent strokes for sharper, more defined results.​ ​ ​ Staff Contact Submission Rules

 

[Marcos DAB]

I can't see exactly what it's this.

 

[SpasMaster]

I can't see exactly what it's this.

Neither do I.
I think I spot the Lich King in there...

 

[Kingz]

Lich King holding Frosmourne, with spirits around him.

The contrast is too high tho.

 

[WindowsVistaSucks]

Looks very cool. But... I did say tone down with the rough shadings Jolly D >_>

 

[I3lackDeath]

I know what this is supposed to look like, but it is really messy. You STILL have to learn not to draw your icons with masses of low-opacity brush strokes, it makes them look very fuzzy...

 

[rcshaggy]

I don't know what I'm looking here sorry.

 

[Apheraz Lucent]

Stunning style, but also overcrowded and undefined.

 

[Cakedog345]

I can't see exactly what it's this.

And me too.

 

[JollyD]

`Updated`

please do not delete Lucent's moderation

 

[rcshaggy]

This will be great for my campaign I'm doing after the Beyond the Dark Portal!

 

[I3lackDeath]

`Updated`

please do not delete Lucent's moderation

Awww... Just what I wanted to do.

Much better than the previous version.
Now you can actually tell it's the Lich King, or at least a figure.

Pretty much approvable in its current state.

Your brush strokes are still rather messy though.
Much like in Impressionism, the same look of each brush stroke creates a fuzzy image.
Try to draw more precisely, less "here a stroke, there a stroke". It will help you create more defined results.

Note that this suggestion applies for icons, not for larger scaled art. I do not want to force any specific style onto you - your icons will simply look more crisp that way.

 

[David]

Quite messy brushing , but I guess it's usefull!

 

[JollyD]

Quite messy brushing , but I guess it's usefull!

Lochnessy brushing