BTNFirework

[Moderator]

11:08, 1st Aug 2009
zombie2279: Interesting shading usage, yet again making the whole thing look a slight bit blurry (mostly gone in-game). The whole thing in general looks a bit empty. Give the whole thing (or at least the middle part some more decorative elements). For the upper part I'd suggest stripes or circles with variative color schemes and the lower, body par could use some sort of text, a symbol, maybe stripes and circles too.

9:22, 3rd Aug 2009
zombie2279: Changes made, approved.

 

[Midnighters]

This rating was done by Midnighters

Creativeness: 6/10
Usefulness: 7/10

Looks like the real thing? [X]

Right now, as the icon stands, it is lacking, here are a few things that needs fixed:

1. Make it more clear, it looks a little blurry
2. Make it look more like a "FireWork"

As of now,
My rating is: Lacking/Needs Fixed

These recommendations are only to help you improve your chances of it being approved.

Midnighters

 

[supertoinkz]

i like the highlight and shadings

 

[Midnighters]

i like the highlight and shadings

Yes, the Highlights and shading seem to be good now that I look at it, I think whats messing it up is the shape of the rocket its self.

 

[Coinblin]

Midnighters, do you understand the angle that the icon is viewed from? Because if you don't, that may be why you think the shape is messed up.

 

[TheHunterKiller]

Looks a bit like a mushroom XD Pretty nice though. Could be a little bit longer i guess.

 

[Midnighters]

Midnighters, do you understand the angle that the icon is viewed from? Because if you don't, that may be why you think the shape is messed up.

Yes, I understand the angle, but it still seems to be ..... wrong, the angle and the shape don't work well in the Icon.

 

[Coinblin]

It's much longer than it actually looks. Its just the perspective thats making it look like a "Mushroom", haha. You're viewing it from an upward angle. That why the Firework's point is only visible through the shading, and thats also why the body of the firework seems so stubby. I try to give all my icons unique Points of view, that way they're less boring.

 

[Panda]

Again i cant tell what it is.

 

[supertoinkz]

what do you do?
It doesn't look like a firework
IT IS NASA ROCKET!

dont look

just kidding

 

[breebree123]

nice one, but the rocket needs to be a little bit thin, and it needs more fire coming out of it
3/5

 

[Latecat]

hmm, if it would be firework, then i think it should have a stick on the bottom because you know, fireworks usually got somesort of a stick with them...

If you add that, i would give it a 5/5. for now, 4/5
i like the style its made

 

[TheHunterKiller]

Whoah, really awesome now!

 

[Latecat]

dude, thats like an VERY epic improvement :O

 

[Jack_Sparrow93]

Looks really nice! Good job!

 

[expazatrix]

Nice Icon but...
The Fire coming out of the bottom doesn't really look like fire from my perspective.