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Make the flames more realistic and add some yellows/reds mixed in. Also, make the blue gem red or orange to match the theme, and maybe center the ring up because its more towards the bottom right now.
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Thanks! Do you mean the gradient strip?this one looks really nice, I just think that the purple inside the ring would be better in a tone of pink, something less saturated (just a bit) and more red-ish (not too much).
Thanks! Do you mean the gradient strip?
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Too dark? You mean these areas?:Some of the shading seems too dark too me, maybe smooth them out a little.
These areas?:The purple shading highlights could be yellow instead from the fire reflection.
Done!Well the light coming off the fire would only hit the outsides of the ring now the inner side, there would be a little light hitting the inner but not too much. so I would remove the purple from the inner and make it a darker gray and then the purple on the outer side make it light yellow from the fire.
Looks better but yes, is there anyway to lower the contrast a bit?Done!
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However, I think purple is better because PeeKay said me to add purple here:
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Which one?Looks better
Well, I always listen to reviewers words but sometimes I have the opposite opinion, including this one. I think the purple colors and the runes should be returned(even the blue color of gem) as you say too. It looks really monotone and boring right now, every thing is orange/yellow. However, they won't approve it if I don't listen to their reviews(No offense at all).well I liked the runes inside the ring, and this is why I said a more pink like tone to the shading. Now it looks kinda dull and not so epic (this is why in the end I don't listen that much to you guys -sorry-, there is a point where critics turn into straightforward directions/orders and I do not like that much)
well I liked the runes inside the ring, and this is why I said a more pink like tone to the shading. Now it looks kinda dull and not so epic (this is why in the end I don't listen that much to you guys -sorry-, there is a point where critics turn into straightforward directions/orders and I do not like that much)
Well, I always listen to reviewers words but sometimes I have the opposite opinion, including this one. I think the purple colors and the runes should be returned(even the blue color of gem) as you say too. It looks really monotone and boring right now, every thing is orange/yellow. However, they won't approve it if I don't listen to their reviews(No offense at all).
Get rid of the shading/black lines in the middle of the rings circle and just make it a solid color, it makes it look rigid and weird. After this ill see where it stands.
I don't want to bother or upset you but you said "middle" of the ring and I thought you meant the inner part. You had to say "top" part. Anyways, here it is done.Well first, i didnt mean the designs in the inner part of the ring i meant the thick black lines on the TOP of the ring.. they make the ring look ridged and wierd shaped. I will end my review and go on from here.
I don't want to bother or upset you but you said "middle" of the ring and I thought you meant the inner part. You had to say "top" part. Anyways, here it is done.
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Wow thanks! I'll edit it soon. But I don't know I should change the gem color to blue (like yours) or I should let it remain red (Acoording to The Panda's review).Actually your direction was rigth, kinda, you just needed to refine it a bit:
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I don't want to bother or upset you but you said "middle" of the ring and I thought you meant the inner part. You had to say "top" part. Anyways, here it is done.
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Updated!
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Thanks!It looks warcraft-ish AF now. Nice job.
Thanks!
Btw, what is AF?
P.S. Yeah, I really liked the name you gave it.
Got it!AF is AS F*CK
Icon Review
Logistic Scale
Blizzard feel
Grade: 6/10 D
Definition: The Ability of an Icon to be indistinguishable from the other icons in Warcraft III.
Note: The Icon doesn't stick out too much and fits decentlyGrade: 7/10 CUsability
Grade: 8/10 B
Definition: The Ability of an Icon to be serve a purpose of high demand and low supply, or multiple low demand instances.
Note: The Icon features most of the borders along with the subject being an item opening an avenue to a large amount of potential implementations.
Note: Use some of blizzards icons as a reference to your target for a better fit unless you are trying to keep your own take on the style and feel of thingsArtistic Scale
Perspective
Grade: 9/10 A
Definition: The scale of how well the Artist has utilized perspective to add depth and definition.
Note: The slightly off angle is wonderful in portrayal of the subject. nice work.Aesthetic
Grade: 6/10 D
Definition: The scale of how well the Artist has utilized colors, shadings, outlines, and other tools to best present the subject.
Note: I believe the fire should light up the areas it touches and cast shadows on the areas it doesn't, and I feel like the dark parts should be darker and the highlights should be sharperArtistic Scale
Grade: 7.5/10 C+
Note: Looks decent. Nice workNice work! Hope to see more of your work soon.
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