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09:12, 10th Jul 2009
zombie2279: Not bad, but too simple. Use more color schemes to detail the fire, tones of red and yellow and make the flame effect more realistic. Make the fire trace waving and swaying. I'd also, yet again, recommend you detailing an exact ball to be seen in the flaming nova, so we can actually see it's a fireball. That also has to increase the general level of detail.
15th Jul
zombie2279: Rejected until updated.
zombie2279: Not bad, but too simple. Use more color schemes to detail the fire, tones of red and yellow and make the flame effect more realistic. Make the fire trace waving and swaying. I'd also, yet again, recommend you detailing an exact ball to be seen in the flaming nova, so we can actually see it's a fireball. That also has to increase the general level of detail.
15th Jul
zombie2279: Rejected until updated.