BTNDragonTongue

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17:50, 13th Nov 2011
Pyramidhe@d: Just looks really messy. The fire is almost cotton like which just turns things hazy.

11 Feb 2012
Pyramidhe@d: The blade looks like it is just a single colour. No sense of thickness or anything.

23 April 2012
Pyramidhe@d: I really wish you would draw some clean shapes now and then. Things with clear outlines and proper shapes.

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I3lackDeath
Date: 2012/Oct/27 15:37:16

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[JollyD]

Icon:

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First Update

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Second Update

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3 Update

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4 Update

omg THE IMBA JOOLYD MADED UPDATE xD N5

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[Blood Raven]

looks too blurry... maybe try sharpening it?
use the sharpen filter if you're using PS, i dont know what the other programs offers.
otherwise, not bad 3/5 for now...

 

[JollyD]

Fully agree, I will update it for sure!

I have made First update

 

[Luorax]

Now it's much better! You're improving dude

 

[I3lackDeath]

Now it's much better! You're improving dude

Definitely!

Since it's the center of attention, define the sword itself more, by sharper shading etc.
Especially the handle blends too much with the flames atm.

 

[Xian]

Oh dragon tongue!
needs more dragon artifacts to complete power of the dragon father though

 

[JollyD]

Oh dragon tongue!
needs more dragon artifacts to complete power of the dragon father though

You will see them in nearest future

 

[Gorb]

Awesome 5/5

 

[JollyD]

Awesome 5/5

Thnx, stay in touch ) I will update it

Please have patience ) I work on this one!
working and listening Raptile music ^)
Second update

 

[WindowsVistaSucks]

Show me the full sized scale image please

 

[JollyD]

Really want to see big image? Why? %)

I think I will make 1-2-3 updates more (1 is 100%)

 

[Nolko]

Can you make ATT/ATC or else please ?

 

[JollyD]

Can you make ATT/ATC or else please ?

Yes, sure I will make them ^)

 

[Gaphry]

Now thats really something nice..

 

[Nolko]

Awesome Thanks !

 

[JollyD]

New update -

 

[Hexcellion]

Latest update looks pretty awesome! 5/5

 

[WindowsVistaSucks]

Not sure... Why did I... On a side note 3/5 good job.

 

[Final-Burn]

The Colour and Texture. This is Truely Amazing After the Many Edits.
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This Deserves a +Rep

 

[8512590215848]

Draw in greater size please and show us wips.

 

[JollyD]

Draw in greater size please and show us wips.

you are not sure that this is my drawing? wips are in 1 post of this icon

 

[8512590215848]

i mean quality of your icons will greatly increase, if you will draw in 640*640 and higher, not in small versions.

 

[JollyD]

i mean quality of your icons will greatly increase, if you will draw in 640*640 and higher, not in small versions.

^) yeah you are right since i started 640 athe progress is, thanks , i work on 192 or 640 as a default now

 

[8512590215848]

Dunno if it will be accepted as i thougt, but try work more accurate. Looking on most of your work (mostly the faces), there is question, how you see the object, when you paint it. When you working on some shape try to move it, change angle for more correct representation and realisation of your idea. At the second icon is on ur sig there is feeling like you painting by some layers that has around 2 pixels distant difference and cuz of that on first layer is a head, on second layer is shoulders and neck. You got my idea? Next time try work more soft, dont add contrasts before the it needed to reach some sort of realistic deep. The second problem of each your icons (or most) - blurryness and overlightness. One of most troubles with a composition - disbalance of a light. Try reach a moment when you have same balance of light and dark. More light means more dark, less light - less dark. You can be original and don't apply this formula to the background but be sure, background is a part of composition

And about faces - try work more with bones and muscles, not with skin. And don't forget about 3D shape (that i saying looking on your orcfaces).

With best regards and no offense

 

[JollyD]

Dunno if it will be accepted as i thougt, but try work more accurate. Looking on most of your work (mostly the faces), there is question, how you see the object, when you paint it. When you working on some shape try to move it, change angle for more correct representation and realisation of your idea. At the second icon is on ur sig there is feeling like you painting by some layers that has around 2 pixels distant difference and cuz of that on first layer is a head, on second layer is shoulders and neck. You got my idea? Next time try work more soft, dont add contrasts before the it needed to reach some sort of realistic deep. The second problem of each your icons (or most) - blurryness and overlightness. One of most troubles with a composition - disbalance of a light. Try reach a moment when you have same balance of light and dark. More light means more dark, less light - less dark. You can be original and don't apply this formula to the background but be sure, background is a part of composition

And about faces - try work more with bones and muscles, not with skin. And don't forget about 3D shape (that i saying looking on your orcfaces).

With best regards and no offense

Thanks for your help, I appreciate your support!

 

[InfernalTater]

This is really nice, 5/5.

 

[JollyD]

A little badass update here//

 

[Arrr]

lol I see a clown on da sword

 

[zbc]

too overdarkened

 

[JollyD]

too overdarkened

No. I will not made any more updates for this. Thank you for your comment. Good luck.

 

[zbc]

try to solve this problem with difference between sword color and background, try add some contrasts on edge.

 

[JollyD]

I am not joking . This time

 

[GaAg0]

omg so coooooooooooL!