BTNCoffinFull2

[Moderator]

19:55, 4th Jul 2009
zombie2279: A good idea base and somewhat realistic outlines, it only needs better shading and more correct wooden looks. Some details, like cracks or missing parts would also do good. It's quite nice, besides that.

8:42, 10th Jul 2009
zombie2279: http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/1203779-post11.html

Rejected until updated.

 

[a7xpwns3]

Teh Subscribe.

 

[Elfsilver Lord]

The edges are waaay to dark. You can't just use 100% opacity black to shade.

 

[breebree123]

too cartoonish,needs more shading. .4/5

 

[Paladon]

needs more shading

Exactly.

 

[stefanstan95]

you should add more shading and detail at the top part. You can add a scratch or something really its relevant.

Update: I like it but i think that it would be better bit darker.

 

[Dmazzz]

The edges are a little too sharp. I like the concept^^

 

[expazatrix]

This is a bit to cartoony still. Would be great if you still added missing pieces like zombie2279 said, it would improve it 10 fold.

 

[a7xpwns3]

/fixed.

Added more color variation, shadings, and more cracks.

 

[KelThuzad]

Darken the edges, make the blook thicker, make the cross more red.

 

[Zombie]

It looks really messy now, worse than previously. The missing parts are rather distortive, I suggest replacing them with smaller cracks, rather than completely removing parts from the coffin. The wooden look around the sides seems to be okay, and you're showing improvements in the middle aswell. The blood and the shading around the cross is messy, I think you might want to consider removing that.

 

[The Panda]

Get rid of all the black sides on the coffin, then re shade it a bit.