BTNBloodFrenzy

[Moderator]

00:56, 5th May 2010
Pyramidhe@d: Tracing does not count as freehand. Dont ever do this again. Consider this as your last warning.

 

[13L4M3]

Big Picture.

 

[Misha]

Yeah.. the teeth are very odd..

 

[NFWar]

Wrap the guy better. Looks a bit like CnP from picture and resize.
Looks good. And again... wrap the guy.

 

[13L4M3]

There's never a icon that i've uploaded where i haven't heard the words "CNP" on :3.
It's like i've read a fking tutorial to get my icons look CNP... -.-.
Well it would be strange if there's a picture like this one anywhere because it' scoming from my dream.
Thanks for the feed, i'll put up new update later!

 

[asailant]

I don't have dreams, thus making me unable to do such nice art

 

[NFWar]

I have no dreams too... but if I see one, it is very wierd. I didnt sayed what this is CnP.
You just made a zombie in picture that dont have size a*a, but a*b.
Tutorial helped you a lot. The zombie looks good and very zombish (XD).
AT 64*64 it is visible what original picture wasnt square. Most of people that do CnP are taking not squared pictures.

This is NOT CnP, but resizing kinda mess proportions. I sugest you to wrap the guy. That is all.

 

[13L4M3]

Aha you meant like That. I usually draw"people" in that size.

 

[dardas]

Nice dude :O i'm sure alot of ppl can use it for good

How the hell are the teeth odd?
in what way?..
its a zombie! they are frigging filled with blood XD Looks awesome =]

 

[asailant]

You could crop the extra length from the jaw, rather than squashing the whole image in.

 

[War_Golum]

You need to improve the following things:

* The head is a little stretched
* The bg should involve only the skull, the rest should be very dark

Over all, very good part of the details

 

[13L4M3]

1. When does à zombie Facebook look normal for god sake ! I wont make the head shorter.

2. I'll fix baxkground

 

[Panda]

The angle is quite weird itself as the face looks bigger and some-what stretching. I would fix the angle of the overall face area and fix the skin a little as it looks like pencil markings.

 

[-Grendel]

i think what they meant about the weird teeth is the lower jaw. i also noticed that. also fix the lower jaw to make it look more natural. but other than that it's horrible(in a good way XD)

 

[13L4M3]

Wtf angle xD! I know about jaw, he misses a cheek and ishould fix that but it wasen't vissible anyway. Well i see what i can do

 

[Dentothor]

ugghh. the fact that you scaled it unpropotionatley in to make it fit the icon size, makes it look so stretched horozontaly. and it makes it look very wierd.
also, the jaw is like somthing you would see out of a cartoon. its like, unattached to the upper jaw it seems. Try to make it look like a real mouth and not like its somthing you would see from a nutcracker zombie.

 

[War_Golum]

Icon Rules - Quality

Quality is really very important: making a scratch icon will not be enough if it is poorly done. Throwing in some filters will generally not produce an acceptable result. Make sure that the final icon is detailed (not blurry or badly resized) and looks good in the game. Icons lacking an active alpha channel will not be approved.

I suggest u to try to improve that resize, The rest are very well.
And if u improve that resize I'll vote for approve =)

 

[13L4M3]

Great :3 no filters used but i'll try fix the resize.
EDIT:"Improve that resize" Well... i've put the orginal in button manager and the squared one also... and the icons comes out 100% simulair... so i dont know what'sha talking about ! !!!

 

[Misha]

lookin' better, however... there aren't so much teeth in any jaw.. especially not teeth that go waaay into the throat.. i think you should remove some..

and dull the tongue a bit..

 

[Dentothor]

i cant see any changes at all in this. all i can see is that you made it a bit darker... -.-

 

[13L4M3]

1. This one is acually before the brighter.
2. I diden't write in description that i had doing any changes because i dont think i realy have.
I just changed my mind about them and i like this one more.
3. I dont like you anyway so stop comment this icon if you dont like it.

 

[Dentothor]

I'm sorry to say, but this is constructive critique from an experienced artist. If you don't want to listen to it just because you don't like me then fine, I will stop producing comments that may help you in the end.

 

[Misha]

Lookin' kind off better.. But i'd change the name to "call of nightmares" or something like that..

one more thing.. the white part of the head is kinda in a huge contrast with the darker parts and almost blending with the whitish icon border..

You should do something to distinguish all 3..

 

[-Grendel]

lookin better, now the lower jaw is much much better. i like the recent changes you have made

 

[Crazed_seal2]

This looks fine... I mean its a freakin zombie not a princess so stop complaining... far-out... A zombie is a freakin retarded lookin thing that hungers for flesh....

 

[13L4M3]

God, finally somebody who understand what i'm saying ! +Rep for you !