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09:45, 16th Nov 2009
Pyramidhe@d: Well it looks erratic. I think you put the motion blur on the blade too strong so it is making the whole sword and the blur look like a random scribble. The top isnt too good either. i should be seeing some sort of a mouth of a vortex. perhaps change the angle of the whole tornado a bit? You could look up Looney Toons and the Tasmanian Devil for an exaggerated tornado, see if that would help you in anyway.
21st Nov 2009
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Pyramidhe@d: Well it looks erratic. I think you put the motion blur on the blade too strong so it is making the whole sword and the blur look like a random scribble. The top isnt too good either. i should be seeing some sort of a mouth of a vortex. perhaps change the angle of the whole tornado a bit? You could look up Looney Toons and the Tasmanian Devil for an exaggerated tornado, see if that would help you in anyway.
21st Nov 2009
No changes made