BTNA7XRedPotionV2

[Moderator]

09:44, 31st Jul 2009
zombie2279: The shape is all wrong, the liquid is blurry and the white around it is rather random. The highlight effects would be altogether quite good, but they distort the thingy in the middle. I'd advise complete reworking, of the shape at least. Quite a shame you left, you're free to update it once you return.

 

[mjllonir]

In all honesty, the glass looks crooked. Is there a way to make it look a little nicer. Also, the inside of the bottle is the same thing as the background. Could you show the red potion a bit more?

 

[a7xpwns3]

Yes, yes, and yes.

 

[The Panda]

Review,
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1.Red liquid needs a bit more realistic feel too it.
2.Shading is in dying need of repair on the rounded part.
3.Background needs too be better it just has splotches of red brush strokes.
4.Details and decoration may be in order.
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(All my recommendations to your icon, you can choose to use these or not, your choice.)
Thanks, Army-of-pandas.

 

[-Berz-]

Fix the shape, and add a bit of contrast.

Else it's fine.

 

[krisserz]

Kinda too cartoonish...

 

[breebree123]

err. .the bottle is a little bit sharp on its edges, make it flat . .

 

[enjoy]

it's shape is weird again..
you have to practice on the shape of the icon!
and blend det red bagground so it wan't look like you made the background in paint.

 

[a7xpwns3]

Damn you, automatic layer flattening p_p

 

[The Panda]

Hmm, what did you do.. looks blank now.

 

[a7xpwns3]

Blank? :O

F5? :O

 

[krisserz]

Before it was better...

 

[expazatrix]

That is really ugly.
Needs alot of improvement. (See above comments).

 

[a7xpwns3]

Krissers, how so? -.-'