The idea is interesting, but the execution is just very basic and lacking technical finesse and mechanical finish.
The model is basically just a very poor skin change.
Please improve the model drastically and make it more unique. Here are some hints and advices:
- The model lacks a proper portrait and a camera does not look good. This is important.
- The model still has a lot of unneeded tracks and issues: Sanity Test - You can use this tool to automaticall remove most flaws (drop the mdx onto the blank page)
- As I said before, the model is just a texture change and offers nothing beside that. Try finding way to make it look more unique and add more altered geometry, animations, effects etc. This is very important.