Blown away

[Moderator]

11:39, 15th Mar 2014
Orcnet:

insufficient description, please add more specifications my tut can help:

http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/...s-456/map-description-making-good-bad-245849/

 

[flowmic]

let me know if there are bugs and give ideas for the updates

 

[LordDz]

I'm going to be a bit blunt here, but your map has a few trigger errors.

1) You should really check out the link in my signature, it will help you a lot with the performance of the map.

2)
Don't have a trigger that is set to repeat every 0.00 seconds.

3)
In the quest 1, why is it that the Paladin is refering to the worker as "her" but the quest says "him"? Is she switching sex directly after talking to the Paladin?

4) You don't need to tell the game to turn day/night cycle on. It's on by default.

5) There are no custom spells for the heroes. People like custom spells. There are that way.

It still looks a bit fun to play, you have some interesting concepts there. But you should really improve the map before you upload it, or those evil perky moderators are going to reject it and we don't want that do we?

 

[PlankingWolf]

I'm going to be a bit blunt here, but your map has a few trigger errors.

1) You should really check out the link in my signature, it will help you a lot with the performance of the map.

2)
Don't have a trigger that is set to repeat every 0.00 seconds.

3)
In the quest 1, why is it that the Paladin is refering to the worker as "her" but the quest says "him"? Is she switching sex directly after talking to the Paladin?

4) You don't need to tell the game to turn day/night cycle on. It's on by default.

5) There are no custom spells for the heroes. People like custom spells. There are that way.

It still looks a bit fun to play, you have some interesting concepts there. But you should really improve the map before you upload it, or those evil perky moderators are going to reject it and we don't want that do we?

You forgot what every Hive member says.
I suggest you use Kobas' http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/miscellaneous-tutorials-456/map-description-templates-171659/ in order to fix that description. Screenshots are optional to add, but it would be nice if you did add some.

 

[flowmic]

thanx for the help will fix the bugs and stuff

 

[DUTY OF RS]

You should add some screen-shoots.
And add details on what-to-do and more.
And have you gotten the permision from exogaming to upload the map?

-200 post !

 

[flowmic]

I am the vice of EXO games

 

[DUTY OF RS]

Ahh ok.

 

[mohab500]

Not really good. Here are the main reasons:-

-Terrain-:
Nice terrain(3/10)
grass and other things mix looks good(3/10)
Mossy things aren't nice(0/10)
Nice terrain on the village(2/10)
Final result : (8/10) on terrain (Recommended)
-Heros-:
Heros are not really good even so their spells (0/10)
Models are awesome!(5/10)



spell animations are not even happening(0/10)
Ideas of sound were bad for the dragon rider Seriously? blade master?(0/10)
Final result: (5/10) (enough)
-Ai-
Computer Ai can't play which is really boring i couldn't play with anyone.please ask someone to make an AI for you if you can't
(0/5) (Non-sense)
-Bugs/Needs fixing-
You can kill the grunt(-1)
Grammer mistakes, spelling mistakes and no capitals(-1)
Silly dialogues(-1)
Final result: (2/5) (Lacking)
-Gameplay-
I didn't find it that real fun(NO RATING DUE TO OPINIONS)
Object editing is pretty bad, Units are very hard i picked easy and that the game was impossible!(10/20)
Final result: (10/20) (Nice)
Overall (25/50)
Not pretty bad Rated 2 and Wish to Await update for this map as it got some good feautures!
Also,i liked that the map is big and huge!,people that like those kinds of gameplay would play alot!

 

[G A T E]

Nice map really !
You may still have a chance to get approve .
Update the description, okay?

Or, if you want me to help you to create a BB Code for your description ^^ I can help with it. Just PM me !

 

[Orcnet]

insufficient description, please add more specifications my tut can help:

http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/...s-456/map-description-making-good-bad-245849/