Black Temple

[Moderator]

17:53, 27th May 2013
Orcnet: Hell_Master's review:

Hey, played your map and I must say you definetly improved a lot. Everything looks better but some yet little adjustments and this is Approved!

[+] Good Points:
-Terrain is decent. You just need to know how to mix tile and also dont put trees at the manmade tiles instead put them at the snow tiles. Terrain is empty. You putted some doodads but that is not enough to give a full detail to the terrain. Fill it up with more fitting doodads and also terrain is flat. Try using Raise/Lower tool to make different levels in the ground, mostly do this at the snow tile parts.
-Map has the required resources: Gold Mines and Shops
-Creeps are balanced enough, not that strong and not that weak.

[-] Bad Points:
-Merc Shops and Taverns are nearer on Plyer 1 Red than Blue. Do you think its quite imbalance because Player 1 Red has all the advantages to buy items and hire heroes by only walking some steps while Player Blue have to walk and walk and walk?

[] Suggestions:
-Improve your terrain more.... see the tips I commented at the good points.
-Make the merc shops and Tavern not so near Player 1. I suggest put the connector to the middle so Tavern and Merch Shops are balanced enough and both players will have no extra advantage or disadvantage.

Overall, this is quite decent melee map with a decent terrain but quite imbalanced positioning of Shops and Taverns. I would rate this 3/5 but still in Pending until those suggestiosn are met.

 

[~DARK~]

~Resrverd~ Like Before Zealot Is Me Although I Want Change My Nickname to D4RK
My Other Maps Will Be Created By D4RK
*I Think The Terrain Of Down Is Bad But I Will Make it Better In Another Maps

 

[WolfFarkas]

hi there

-you puted two green creeps to the north map but you didnt with the south, it is unfair for the south blue player.

-player blue must walk more than the player red to reach the center, it is unfairy for player blue,

-it is unfairy for player red, the north one because he cant acces the dragon root like the blue one of south
and the dragon root is much better than the tavern

-for a melee map balance is very important

-the decoration of the center is nice but in orthodox maps , taverns are not defended by creeps

if i would do something, i change the center to be simetrical at the same distance of both players
and put the dragon rot in the center,, and not in the blue south player region

edit: spox/zealot you have double posted

 

[Daffa]

-the decoration of the center is nice but in orthodox maps , taverns are not defended by creeps

Creeps are not meant to defend a tavern

 

[Daffa]

I think the map symmetrically isn't very balanced as abgm stated.

You don't have to make it too symmetric but try give both players equal facility.

 

[WolfFarkas]

I think the map symmetrically isn't very balanced as abgm stated.

You don't have to make it too symmetric but try give both players equal facility.

you won me in this one
so is a tie

 

[~DARK~]

I Will Make It Better . But I See A Lot Of Good Terrianed Map That Red Creeps Guard The Traven I will the Blue Side Better And Make The Terrain Great Thanks For Your Reviews .

 

[Daffa]

Meh, we don't really do anything.

 

[Binsu]

Hey, played your map and I must say you definetly improved a lot. Everything looks better but some yet little adjustments and this is Approved!

[+] Good Points:
-Terrain is decent. You just need to know how to mix tile and also dont put trees at the manmade tiles instead put them at the snow tiles. Terrain is empty. You putted some doodads but that is not enough to give a full detail to the terrain. Fill it up with more fitting doodads and also terrain is flat. Try using Raise/Lower tool to make different levels in the ground, mostly do this at the snow tile parts.
-Map has the required resources: Gold Mines and Shops
-Creeps are balanced enough, not that strong and not that weak.

[-] Bad Points:
-Merc Shops and Taverns are nearer on Plyer 1 Red than Blue. Do you think its quite imbalance because Player 1 Red has all the advantages to buy items and hire heroes by only walking some steps while Player Blue have to walk and walk and walk?

[] Suggestions:
-Improve your terrain more.... see the tips I commented at the good points.
-Make the merc shops and Tavern not so near Player 1. I suggest put the connector to the middle so Tavern and Merch Shops are balanced enough and both players will have no extra advantage or disadvantage.

Overall, this is quite decent melee map with a decent terrain but quite imbalanced positioning of Shops and Taverns. I would rate this 3/5 but still in Pending until those suggestiosn are met.

 

[~DARK~]

So I Improved ? Thanks For Your Review Hell_Master

 

[Binsu]

So I Improved ? Thanks For Your Review Hell_Master

Indeed just some terrain improvements and also some correct positioning if shops and Taverns and this will be your first approved melee map!

 

[Daffa]

^Good point mate.

Anyway, the balance must be done first, then it's good to go.

 

[~DARK~]

Sure,Just Give Me 5 Days And I Will Make It

 

[Sunreaver]

What new races are in this map