Arm whit a AXE

[Jacky The turtle]

Hey im try to make paly beastmaster =D
im think this is my best work =D
please crit it
and his left finger is cursed so think dont ?? okay?

 

[raid1000]

make the axe bigger and the stick longer or else everyone on the battlefield will laugh at him

 

[Jacky The turtle]

it a trowing axe =P

 

[Deleted member 157129]

An axe the size of a butter-knife is rather useless. The skin-tone of his hand is very.. dead, and the random colours (even if it's supposed to be cursed) doesn't look very nice.

 

[Jacky The turtle]

i made a new drawing i called angry fish =P

 

[DudeSpirit]

Looks really cool, I'm no professional artist or anything but i like how the light reflects and everything..

 

[Jacky The turtle]

ty =D

 

[Deleted member 157129]

i made a new drawing i called angry fish =P

Now that is actually rather neat!

 

[takakenji]

i like the angry fish

 

[Jacky The turtle]

=D ty more will come i make a bg for the fish =P*done*

 

[legospencer]

=D ty more will come i make a bg for the fish =P*done*

I was just about to suggest you put him in an underwater cave before I saw this... and now... well, what criticism can I spout if you took my advice even before I voiced it?

Very nice job.

EDIT: Actually, I do have something to say about it. It seems to me that you sharpened some of the edges around the cave too much (or something to distort it). It gives-off that unpleasant granulated and highly-saturated look, yah know? I assume that you were trying to make it seem as if the light from the fish was illuminating softly upon the cave rock, but perhaps recoloring the rock would be a better method. The blurriness of the surrounding cave is very nice, and I think it would look best if all of teh cave was that kind of consistency.

Anyway, good piece!

 

[Nbah]

I don't like that sharpened look. You should have just used a light green glowing brush around the stones and the fish as you did with the previous pic. Otherwise, looks pretty cool.