1) Terrain - The terrain need improvement. It seems like you use blizzard cliff to form a hill by pilling them up. This eventually make them look like a canyon instead of hill and it was rather ugly.
Forest doesn't consists of 1 type of tree with same size and height. Also, it lack of some destructible/doodad such as shrub, flower and etc etc.
2) Camera - I have to said you did a horrible job at the camera. The camera always on birdpoint view with a rather thick fog on it, making it rather difficult to view.
To make the matter worst, the camera sometimes moves at the wrong direction and resulted into a terrible scene. Take a look at the screenshot to know exactly well of what's wrong with it.
3) Special Effect - Special effect is alright, nothing soo special about it.
4) Music & Sound - It was a music cinematic and it was connected to religion. I won't comment anything about it.
5) Description - The description at this site could be better instead of given a simple sentence "This map is a short cinematic with a beautiful religious song."
6) Credit - There is no credit in this cinematic, I am not sure if there is any custom resources such as model or skin have been used inside this cinematic or not due to the constant birdview point. But, if there is any custom material been used. Do remember to credit them.
Overall, this was a music cinematic with religion song on it. Based on the current condition, it was between rating 1 (Unacceptable) and rating 2 (Lacking).
However, under a good consideration; I decided to vote it rating 1 (Unacceptable) mainly due to the poor camera setup.
Approved
. nahhhhhh
