(2) Plain of Terror

[mafe]

Uhm well. It's so-so map. I'll just outline some issues (the list is non-complete):
-Itemdrops: Dont have 50%/50% chances for items of different level.
-Countless of small paths between trees.
-Creeps at expansions not on camp stance (and why do you put creeps at the main bases in a 1v1 map?).
-Some creep will attack units that reinforce your army.
-Shop vs Merc Camp asymmetry.

There's also some debatable stuff, which I think makes for unenjoyable game
-Just two places to cross the river.
-Fastexpansion is impossible.
-Flying creepcamps (undead cannot attack those before tier 2 and web).
-Main bases cant be walled off to protect workers.

Therefore set to Awaiting update, as I still have some hope this map can be turned into something okay-ish. BUt for this at least some of the isseus need to be addressed. And given that you have by now several maps as awaiting update without respoding (publicly) to any review, I wonder if you actually intend to improve them at all....?

 

[Diego Delgado]

Uhm well. It's so-so map. I'll just outline some issues (the list is non-complete):
-Itemdrops: Dont have 50%/50% chances for items of different level.
-Countless of small paths between trees.
-Creeps at expansions not on camp stance (and why do you put creeps at the main bases in a 1v1 map?).
-Some creep will attack units that reinforce your army.
-Shop vs Merc Camp asymmetry.

There's also some debatable stuff, which I think makes for unenjoyable game
-Just two places to cross the river.
-Fastexpansion is impossible.
-Flying creepcamps (undead cannot attack those before tier 2 and web).
-Main bases cant be walled off to protect workers.

Therefore set to Awaiting update, as I still have some hope this map can be turned into something okay-ish. BUt for this at least some of the isseus need to be addressed. And given that you have by now several maps as awaiting update without respoding (publicly) to any review, I wonder if you actually intend to improve them at all....?

this map and modify it according to your suggestions you could take a look

 

[mafe]

Let's see:

-Itemdrops: Dont have 50%/50% chances for items of different level.

This issue still exists.

-Countless of small paths between trees.

This issue still exists.

-Creeps at expansions not on camp stance (and why do you put creeps at the main bases in a 1v1 map?).

Technically, the creeps at the expansions are still on camp stance. However there are is lvl 7 creeps there, which attacks buildings from far away anyway. Maybe I missed this before. So I count this as fixed.

-Some creep will attack units that reinforce your army.

This issue still exists.

-Shop vs Merc Camp asymmetry.

This is fixed.

-Just two places to cross the river.

This has been changed an improved a lot.

-Fastexpansion is impossible.

This is still the case, but a somewhat debatable issue.

-Flying creepcamps (undead cannot attack those before tier 2 and web).

This is still the case.

-Main bases cant be walled off to protect workers.

This has been changed and improved.
Additionally, the creeps at one of the harpy/centaur camps are now not the same on both sides of the map.

So basically, you have not change the majority of the issues which I mentioned. The map is better now, but still questionable. Do you disagree with them, or do you not understand what I mean (in this case, I can explain it more detail)? I would like to hear your opinion on this. Currently I think the map is slightly better, but not good enough to be approved yet.

 

[Diego Delgado]

Let's see:

This issue still exists.

This issue still exists.

Technically, the creeps at the expansions are still on camp stance. However there are is lvl 7 creeps there, which attacks buildings from far away anyway. Maybe I missed this before. So I count this as fixed.

This issue still exists.

This is fixed.



This has been changed an improved a lot.

This is still the case, but a somewhat debatable issue.

This is still the case.

This has been changed and improved.
Additionally, the creeps at one of the harpy/centaur camps are now not the same on both sides of the map.

So basically, you have not change the majority of the issues which I mentioned. The map is better now, but still questionable. Do you disagree with them, or do you not understand what I mean (in this case, I can explain it more detail)? I would like to hear your opinion on this. Currently I think the map is slightly better, but not good enough to be approved yet.

I understand I insisted on repairing the other missing errors

 

[mafe]

I understand I insisted on repairing the other missing errors

So imho you should fix some more issues.
Also, it would be nice if you change the ingame description to english (technically, only english maps are allowed for submission on the hiveworkshop).
So map set to awaiting update again.

 

[Diego Delgado]

So imho you should fix some more issues.
Also, it would be nice if you change the ingame description to english (technically, only english maps are allowed for submission on the hiveworkshop).
So map set to awaiting update again.

I already fixed some mistakes you mentioned. Could you check it out?

 

[mafe]

I already fixed some mistakes you mentioned. Could you check it out?

My apologies for taking so long to react.
Yes I checked out the changes you made. Thank you for changes the langauge to english, but I still think you should make a few more changes, or explain why you dont want to make them. Is that ok for you?

 

[Diego Delgado]

My apologies for taking so long to react.
Yes I checked out the changes you made. Thank you for changes the langauge to english, but I still think you should make a few more changes, or explain why you dont want to make them. Is that ok for you?

It's not that I don't want to change them, it's that now I'm working on a mod and I don't have much time as soon as I have time, I'll improve the map

 

[mafe]

It's not that I don't want to change them, it's that now I'm working on a mod and I don't have much time as soon as I have time, I'll improve the map

Ok. So I will put the map back to Awaiting Update. This means it is clear it currently will not be reviewed any further; however if you make an update, the map will automatically go back to "Pending" and then I will have another look.

 

[mafe]

No update or response in more than 3 months. Therefore set to substandard.