The Lost Chronicles - The Landazor Empire

[deepstrasz]

Some names are missing from: Resources in use by 01 - The Landazor Empire
Please also credit external (outside the site) stuff.

Is it finished?
It's not clear. Your story but it's se in the Warcraft III universe but it's not alternate universe/story although names and plot seem not to even be connected to Warcraft?

 

[Tryndamere]

Hey bro, I've played up to chapter 4, your campaign actually has good potential but I think the beginning of the chapter, namely from chapter 1 to 3, could actually be made into just one chapter because the map is too simple, well, only in chapter 4 can you focus on surviving but the map in chapter 4 is too narrow, it can still be developed further, I hope the creator of this campaign reads my message

 

[Almost Masterpiece]

Some names are missing from: Resources in use by 01 - The Landazor Empire
Please also credit external (outside the site) stuff.

Is it finished?
It's not clear. Your story but it's se in the Warcraft III universe but it's not alternate universe/story although names and plot seem not to even be connected to Warcraft

• Some of the imported files are not used in this campaign, but do I must put the credits? (I'm asking genuinely)
• So basically the AI stuff?

- It's still on going
This is not an alternate universe/story, but my own story with my own idea. I just trying to make a campaign looks like the "Legend of Arkain"

Hey bro, I've played up to chapter 4, your campaign actually has good potential but I think the beginning of the chapter, namely from chapter 1 to 3, could actually be made into just one chapter because the map is too simple, well, only in chapter 4 can you focus on surviving but the map in chapter 4 is too narrow, it can still be developed further, I hope the creator of this campaign reads my message

I think chapter 1 - 2 could be rearranged and make it to be one chapter. But the chapter 3 is a different map, so I can't rearrange it.

But anyway, thanks for the review! I'm gladly to improve myself further!

 

[Tryndamere]

I think chapter 1 - 2 could be rearranged and make it to be one chapter. But the chapter 3 is a different map, so I can't rearrange it.

But anyway, thanks for the review! I'm gladly to improve myself further!

In chapter 4, General Rucky lacks "Hero Glow," and our hero's spells are unbalanced and overpowered. Perhaps his damage could be nerfed. Enemy heroes need to be leveled up and their item slots filled with a variety of permanent items to make it interesting when we face them.
The goldmine on the map may need to be increased in capacity even more...

And also my message for this campaign seems like it needs to be overhauled every chapter starting from chapter 5 until the last chapter, because I noticed the map used is always the same, it would be better to change the map location too, don't keep it around the same place, make a map that is wide and varied I'm sure this campaign can deserve a rating of 4 or 5 if the campaign is improved in terms of the map per chapter, the enemy heroes are given new models, the spells of each enemy hero are not the default ones from Warcraft 3, the story delivery is improved again, the cinematic is already good in this campaign.. come on, fellow new campaign makers, keep up the spirit

 

[Almost Masterpiece]

In chapter 4, General Rucky lacks "Hero Glow," and our hero's spells are unbalanced and overpowered. Perhaps his damage could be nerfed.

Actually, yes. Because my first thought for making this campaign is to be played by myself. But I know that at least I have to try post my own campaign to public and let anyone plays it and see if they enjoyed or not.

And also my message for this campaign seems like it needs to be overhauled every chapter starting from chapter 5 until the last chapter, because I noticed the map used is always the same, it would be better to change the map location too, don't keep it around the same place

Yes, it is that I used the same map for chapter 5 - epilouge. But that doesn't mean I won't be creative or improving my campaign. Because back to the last sentence I wrote "my first thought for making this campaign is to be played by myself", so I didn't thought about making a new map will be needed. But anyway, thank you for replying! I'll take the criticism for improving myself better in the next campaign. If I still had some time to spare, I will try to keep updating this campaign so everyone will enjoyed playing it