Well, it's not really the Warcraft style because of the obvious text on black screen thing. However, it's OK. I guess you could use a splat or something like a paper image on which the text could/should appear. Also, maybe a different text font (hand written/runic or something)?
I don't like cinematics, becuase you are very limited in terms of animation. Unless you create animations for all the facial expressions and actions they do in the texts, my way is much easier.
I won't use different coloured texts for when people say things, because sometimes it should not be there. It is written more like a piece from a book, rather than short snippets in wc3.
I'll probably not change this, but thanks for your opinion!
Did you like the story itself? And the way it was told is better or worse than wc3 style?