JonathanGriswald

Moderator · Oct 14, 2005

20:07, 6th Sep 2008
Hawkwing:
[Approved]
Some areas could use some work, but in my books this is a minimal pass.

antihero · Oct 14, 2005

Cute face, its getting there...though the lips are just ridiculously big.
The muscles are really bad however.

falcoknight · Oct 14, 2005

There is no muscles on him.. just a crappy line.. blizzard employees got lazy, i didn't know how to place the musscles.. and the lips well they are also blizzards model. on their model their lips are that big.. if i didn't make them that big then the model would look retarted

Though.. the upper lip needs some work.. tho i dont want to piss afronight off...

antihero · Oct 14, 2005

Perhaps I'm looking at a different skin, but the blizzard one has normal size lip and no upper lip....also it doesn't have muscles....just bones.
Perhaps clothes might be a better idea then bare skin.

falcoknight · Oct 14, 2005

I based mine off of the daralon mutant.. the upper lip is rong i agree.. and i should add clothes over his skin.. hehe

your right anti-hero

antihero · Oct 14, 2005

Well I think you should try to lessen the size of his lower lip too.

You know that you can resubmit your skin without deleting it. All you have to do is rename the skin file and the screenshot.

Leopard · Oct 14, 2005

There is no muscles on him.. just a crappy line.. blizzard employees got lazy, i didn't know how to place the musscles..

That's why you need more shading on his muscles, arm, and foot.

cheetory6 · Oct 14, 2005

Change the colour of his socks to brown and he's EGOR lol. Anyway it looks ok you should maybe try and get the face to look more male cause from far away he looks female cuz of lips.

Goliath the God · Oct 14, 2005

He looks enough like a male, cheetory.
But the lips needs fix. First off the upper lip doesn't wrap good. The under lip is too fat. And it would be better to alpha out that arm than keeping it like this. Ehmm.. Kinda the same for the legs. His teeths is very unreal - who has rectangular teeths?

The skin-tone is better on this one, but I'm not all satified with it.

qwerty · Oct 16, 2005

he looks like a chimp from afar.

halo · Oct 18, 2005

Face skintones are horrible.
You seem too have only midtones and bright colors.
When making faces go in this order:
midtones,shadows,light,pink and then hair.
Oh and btw nice hair.
Males look beter with no upper lip or a smallone in skins.

3.3/5

xctaek21 · May 2, 2009

i really like it...but its too large for my map : (

good work keep it up 5/5

DMCfan · Nov 4, 2010

nice skin gj

Splub · Jan 2, 2015

Cool skin!

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