01:17, 21st Oct 2008
Septimus: Ok, you bragging and said me lose because you finish this map. So, let me see how good it was.

Chapter 1

First of all, those trigger leak. I do not give a damn about leak if the entire chapter is a cinematic map, but this is not a cinematic map. Leak trigger could cause the save file size to increase, longer loading time and probably lag.

Second, once the unit enter xxx region. There would be a cinematic transmission, but people would not know what the hell the character are talking about as there is no text, sound voice or cinematic on to let us know about it either.

Third, it is partically boring and blah to play all the way to the top as there is no skill as well. What do you expect ?

Fourth, the terrain are partically blank. Does space really 100% blank ? Why not used a custom skin for terrain. We have a custom skin at skin section for terrain that look like a star to give a better view.

Chapter 2

Nothing much to said, all problem that occur at chapter 1.. seems to repeat at chapter 2 as well.

Also, you did not add a game cache system which is crucial at every campaign.

Rejected

The third map i added in mistake, so don't be all strange-minded. Second map is cool, in Platform style, where you move Left-Right and attack. First one sucks.

I give the campaign 1 of 5 points- It´s awful
I have only 3 pro point:
- Nice models
- I mean there are no grammar mistakes
- 2 chapter can be good

Negative:
- The whole campaign?!
- It isn´t like in the movie or book
- 1. chapter: i can fly without meeting an enemy up to Count Dooku; i used the right side- Lol you can´t destroy Count Dooku he is much stronger than you- i have cheat to win
- 2. chapter: boring terrain, only 2 differnent enemys- not like in the movie or book

Reply

OK, i know about the all things you said, but in the full version, EVERYTHING will be MUCH better: terrain, first chapter, all chapters, e.t.c. I made this in hurry because of a bet, and i won 10 bucks.

map 3 is the same than 1

Rifle-Man said:

OK, i know about the all things you said, but in the full version, EVERYTHING will be MUCH better: terrain, first chapter, all chapters, e.t.c. I made this in hurry because of a bet, and i won 10 bucks.

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You shouldn't have bothered uploading this much of campaing. No point letting people down with a teaser. Another thing - I'd get much more than 10 bucks if I get 1 penny every time I hear this '' but in the full version, EVERYTHING will be MUCH better ''. Though if you are seriously trying to make this better then best luck.