22:23, 20th Oct 2009
ap0calypse: Rejected

Violates the map submission rules (quality is too low, bad description).

Sorry to say this, but:
Cinematics are horrible quality.
Pointless terrain, hopeless design, e.t.c....
I just wat to say that you should improve a LOT before you can count of approval of these...

Hmm Narrator seems to be really disappointed, so if you think you need more help, then just check out my cinematics, especially Part 3 because ive put alot if tips in the triggers.
I will check this now^^
And also, IMPROVE the description, tell us something about the story etc.
Alright what is this?:"This si my firs group of cinamaics.Enjoy!"????????????????????
Edit:Im done watching the first 20 seconds of the first cinematic and heres my review:
I dont really have anything to say except.......SEPTIMUS can you come over here for a moment?!
I would suggest you read some tutorials first-.- and then start your project in the development forum.

Well...

Some facts:
You really need to learn to "write" better or have a look on it later.
Examples:
- This si my firs group of cinemaics. So Enjoy!
- PasQual's Cinemaics
- wose (2 Times!) I think you ment =was=
- Husband (Well you just forgot a letter)

The Terrain:
First Map: - It was really bad
Second Map: - It was a bit better
Third Map: - Between bad and okay

I see you took time with the Special Effects, they weren't so bad.

There were some real funny parts =) +

--------------------------------------------------------------------------
It was your first Cinematic! My first was worse than yours
Just don't stop making Cinematics! 3/5!

Poor triggering, poor terrain with 0 of tiles variation, no fog, poor camera setup, horribly long dialog (I was wondering what the hell it took soo long just to say 2 word "Yeah! Ok".

I do not have any mood to comment about it, the description at this site does not even worth a dime to be comment about.

Please read the submission rules before submitting it right away.

OMG my septimus call actually worked^^
And check these tutorials first:
1
2
3
4

It seems Septimus already said everything needed to say...
I was too lazy to answer the call, but okay... you really need to work on your triggering.
As vengeance already said, check those tutorials... they can really help you!

Rejected.

First of all, why the f*** are they fighting in the 1st cinematic?! Killing themselves for fun?!
Second, i think u forgot the sheep in 3rd cinematic
Third, i agree with T3rm1n4tor, several typos.
Last, when i watched the 1st cinematic, it was so boooring. Make more Camera moves, make better tarrain and don't make some flat grass outside the cliffs.
------------------------------- ==== -------------------------------
If this is really your first cine/campaign ... i will give you a 3/5
Don't stop making cinematics and read some tuts about terraining...