THE_END: Mostly just a big gray blob in game..hmm no

changes:

-removed the cables
-more lighter
-more shading

too white, needs a lil more shading and highlightning

I think u must contrast and low the luminosity.
It looks almost perfect, continue !

luminosity? contrast? :?:

Contrast: difference between light and dark. You don't have enough.

Luminosity: amount of "glow" I think. He means that this is all-round a bit too bright.

I have one thing to add: you really, really need a contrast colour somewhere on this. It looks far too plain. Perhaps bring back the wires but do them all flowing in the same direction. Also, you can make them look better than they did before by highlighting the middle and darkening the edges.

cables are better

There are no cables...

it's good that you have shaded it more but it's a bit to bright now

cables looked good, but if you were to add them, you would need to shade each one indiviadually, like on my skin.

ok... please rate it

not bad, but needs some overall shading, and maybe some colours?
also, increase the contrast or else it looks bad ingame

Good... it looks really nice. I'd give it a 4/5 since it needs some more work.

yea it does need some work but it is still quite good.