17:10, 1st Sep 2008
Dan van Ohllus:
[Pending]
All of the modified parts lack proper shading and definitions. I suggest you to take a look at the tutorials at the forum and learn to improve.

You have 10 days, and if I don't see at least any decent quality update on this, then the skin will be rejected.

Edit:
[Rejected]
Skin rejected due to author's request.

comeone hawkwing start harrasing

QUOTE: my first skin i just recolored the wolfs body i made the head.

that's not good enough, i'm afraid. yo need lot more efort.

Negative:
- first, awful choice for keywords (way the go troll)
- recolor
- poorly made
- no shadings and highlights. (read some tutorials dude)
- overal apearance: blurry and messy.
- needs definition
Positive:
+ i like the head ^^ try everything freehand
+ nice concept idea
Overal: bad! try to improve. Rating: 2.22/5 I'm not mean tho..... ^_^

This is just a horrible simple recolor. And, now that Misha has spoken and I saw what the key words were... I have even more questions about you... Oo I think I will be keeping my distance from you...

ITS NOT A RECOLOR please check the original farseer skin an mine from distance it looks like a recolor but its not. please download the skin first beforre going with your bullshit comments. Or better try to reclor your self and see if you get the same skin Ill +rep you.

Over 90% of the changes are recolour. My intention is not to praise myself, or anything of the kind, but I suggest you skim through my tutorial: http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/f283/anti-noobism-texturing-92402/

please tell me whats that 90% its recolored. Im saying the face its not a recolor its the same face but I made it myself please lookly closely, and i also made the body and the head of the wolf im sure thats not 90% but whatever. BTW why dont u downlaod the skin first if you look closely its not the same download original and mine here so you can compare ( brings mdx files ) http://www.hiveworkshop.com/resources_new/pastebin/show/09066124403a7fd474fe2b19acf34487/

anywyas Ill try to change the head.

I look at the Unwrap Preview and bring up the original Far Seer and compaired. You used an approximately 70% opacity red brush and covered the face and other areas. That is considered recolour.

mario_64 said:

ITS NOT A RECOLOR please check the original farseer skin an mine from distance it looks like a recolor but its not. please download the skin first beforre going with your bullshit comments. Or better try to reclor your self and see if you get the same skin Ill +rep you.

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- posting irelevant things

can't take the heat? get out of the nuclear reactor.

proof if you wont believe me heres some proof where i used same techniquie. Pastebin - The Hive Workshop - Warcraft 3 Maps, Icons, Spells, Tools, Tutorials, Skins, Models, Campaigns, Scenarios

Btw i was making first this model but then i changed to farseer.

What are you trying to prove? This has recolour too and some freehand with inappropriate shadows and highlights.

I'm trying to prove that I used same technique, but whatever I'll just never upload an skin again.

No! Upload skins, we love to see activity from you guys. But unless there's a good amount of freehand they wont get approved.

Here are the comparisons so no more people have to download it to compare (As nice as it is to know people are downloading your stuff. )

Yes, the stuff that is not recolour is very undefined and it lacking in appropriate shadows, highlights, and alpha.

Ugly,his chest has no muscles,dog's head is totaly dumb.

This is an example of why I would never upload anything I have made. I don't want to get verbally raped >.>

OH jezzz. dude don't get so quickly ofended by our coments. most of us are just teasing yo ^^ but Hawkwing and i are giving yo some real suggestions on how to improve.
do try more skins.

EDIT: Seen my sig? people love me

Arik said:

This is an example of why I would never upload anything I have made. I don't want to get verbally raped >.>

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Criticism is how you improve. If we all praised you, but in reality the skin is horrible, what would you learn? Absolutely nothing. That aside, there's constructive criticism, and just bashing. (ex: Positive and Negative points of the skin vs "This sucks".) Skinning, like everything else, you gradually get better, and you do that by listening to constructive criticism, and looking at tutorials. Remember the comments aren't there to discourage you, but rather help you improve. Some people are artistic, and can whip out skins, and you say holy crap. For the rest of us its like Misha sig says, you have to work hard, instead of simply defending your skin, constantly improve it. (Not to say those who are more artistic do not work hard either) [End Rant]

As for the skin, the highlights and shadings are extremely lacking. Like said before me, look at Tutorials, here as well as wc3campaigns, they are EXTREMELY helpful.

Are you gonna update it soon? It looks quite bad for the moment...

God i love it!

Well yes I will update it but not today tho, I still need to finish a model I want to upload today.

Thanks devinearmy.

and sorry I still need to learn to take feedback.

Sorry to burst your bubble but DA is joking...As for the skin, I think you get the idea. Dont worry about it though all of us didnt know how to skin when we started. That was like a month ago for misha =P

My first two textures were recolours. -.-

lol. I learned how to skin through trial and error. Then again, it does help to have an eye for art.