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zombie2279: The usual, high-level distortion and blurryness, in this case the weird highlight effect is the cause and the messy handle part. Yet again, it overall needs more contrast and outline thickening, and you should divide different parts so they won't blend into each other. I also recommend you completely rework the highlight on it, so it would be less messy.
8:38, 27th Aug 2009
zombie2279: Yet again, looks worse and much messier. Add more contrast to the outlines so the parts can be distinguished, then individually shade and highlight them. Try to use a more visible color scheme for the handle overall, it blends in with the background too much. Also, try adding a glow, so the whole thing is more visible, which also should remove a large part of the mess in the bg.
29th Aug 2009
zombie2279: No changes made, rejected until updated.