I'm not underestimating my story, I believe it could possibly rival LotR if written properly, but I don't think I have the skill and patience to do the descriptions of stuff and people as they do in the books.
I mean, how good was the description above?(I'm asking)
Here's another example of how I would describe a person:
"A day has passed, and they were still on their feet, mercilessly trying to find the one the captain spoke of. The coolness of the night gave them energy to prolong their journey and it was then that they saw, what appeared to be, a small workshop. As they approached a shabby old man jumped from behind an old armor rack and stared at the gang for a few seconds. The man has clearly been away from civilization for at least a year. His clothes were dirty and ripped, his belt was hanging, barely holding his pants and his beard was long, messy, and filthy. The only thing that seemed extraordinary in his appearance was a long, red, cape."