It was pure garbage...
No but really I liked it hough there were a few issues, in the opening screen there are a few grammatical errors, first it's "High King" and not "High Kind" which is the title of Anasterian. Second it's "a series of events" not "a serie", third the word following "events is spelled "re" I assume you mean the word "are". Forth, during her first dialouge, the yellow text refers to Leathaly as Sylvanas.
One more thing I think could be slightly improved during her first scene Vereesa is seen running over a green field and after running all the way she just stops dead in hear tracks before the switch of scenes, this feels a bit strange and I'd reccomend having Vereesa run a bit past the field of view. A second reccomendation I'd have and this is from a lore perspective, that is when writting future story make Vereesa a hot head, here's a few lines which depict Vereesa from Day of the Dragon:
"Most people thought elves had the patience of glaciers, but younger ones such as herself, just a year out of her appreanticeship in the rangers, were very much like humans in that one regard."
"The ranger had not expected her first major assignement to be playing nursemaid to some doddering and clearly forgetful old mage."
"One of the locals in the inn had made the mistake of admiring the feminine aspects of her appearance while entirely ignoring the military ones. Because he had been drunk and possibly would have held back his rude suggestions otherwise, Vereesa had only left him with a few broken fingers."
This is who Vereesa was at that age, approximatly 10 years prior to WarCraft III, she was short to temper, impatient and violent, also about 1 year after the events you describe Vereesa was found in War of the Ancients to be very late in her pregnancy meaning that if you wanted to, this campaign could end with Vereesa finding out she's pregnant.