War Garden

[Moderator]

not your map

 

[-SmaSHeR-]

rate & comment
WIll add screenie later

 

[Binsu]

Okay played your map and it is quite good. Let my review do the talking here, shall we?

[+] Good Points:
-Terrain is good. I see that it is quite not flat but at still some points, it is. You know the tools to you used on this one I guess. And at least you've used some basic doodads but still terrain is quite empty at some point. Maybe you can fill it with some more.
-Map has required resources:

• Shops
• Gold Mines
• Goblin Labs
• Mercenary Camps

-Player positioning looks good and fine
-Creeps are balanced enough.
-Has strategic ways.

[-] Bad Points:
-None

[] Suggestions:
-Improve the terrain quite more. Tips were given to you!
-Add some fountains for better survival rates of players

Overall, good melee map with good terrain, well positioned players, balanced creeps and some strategic ways. I would rate this 4/5 and +4 REP (after I wait some time because I just REPPED you at your last map) to you!

Voting for Approval!

 

[-SmaSHeR-]

Okay played your map and it is quite good. Let my review do the talking here, shall we?

[+] Good Points:
-Terrain is good. I see that it is quite not flat but at still some points, it is. You know the tools to you used on this one I guess. And at least you've used some basic doodads but still terrain is quite empty at some point. Maybe you can fill it with some more.
-Map has required resources:

• Shops
• Gold Mines
• Goblin Labs
• Mercenary Camps

-Player positioning looks good and fine
-Creeps are balanced enough.
-Has strategic ways.

[-] Bad Points:
-None

[] Suggestions:
-Improve the terrain quite more. Tips were given to you!
-Add some fountains for better survival rates of players

Overall, good melee map with good terrain, well positioned players, balanced creeps and some strategic ways. I would rate this 4/5 and +4 REP (after I wait some time because I just REPPED you at your last map) to you!

Voting for Approval!

aha thanks for the review your great

 

[Binsu]

aha thanks for the review your great

Lol, I dont get tired of this

Actually, Im gong to sleep now so when you submit another map, I will probably review it by tommorow.

 

[-SmaSHeR-]

congratulation GodS_SmaSHeR

i liked your map too

good things
-same said by hell master

things to improve
- you could the decorate a little more, like put a destroyed tower, or a farm with the plants like cultive, this kind of maps offer a lot of posibilities
-when you use units to decorate, i recomend to put it as invulnerable or as a doad, with the model changed, thats to avoid player killing your decoration as a destructible.

i dont want to say, this but i have to, when you create a topic with your map and you are the first posting on it, ti is cosider double post,

doodads are my weak spot

 

[gumba]

Wow another meele map of yours
you are really good at making maps

 

[Binsu]

my favorite part is to put the doads

i cant stop looking at that girl walking upstairs... is to much.

THAT butt!

 

[-SmaSHeR-]

Wow another meele map of yours
you are really good at making maps

Well i cant make nor models nor icons
so what else should i do

 

[WolfFarkas]

there a lot of things to do
-the point is to enjoy the making, get struck with hard maps, because the triggering or the gameplay, it is useless

edit: i forgot to say, i think this map is better than your War Isle, thats good, it means you are improving.

 

[Remixer]

You should fix those sharp ramps at Mercenary Camps.

I think the roads are kind a too wide, you should try add some grass near the cliffs not just road right away. Also you should train your cliff using, now it is mostly just +2 cliffs, you should use both +1 and +2. Also the rivers, on their shores is a long line of trees, it looks ugly since there is only 1 tree after another, you should make some open spots there so that you could see to the river.

Also a suggestion that you change the fence type of the graveyard to fence (metal one) found from Ice Crown Glacier tileset.

I think Blue and Teal bases are smaller than the other two, you should make them larger and add more wood in there, Red and Purple has lot more of it. Also move the green creep camps a little away from the bases, they are now too close.