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VillagerKid.blp

Submitted by expazatrix
This bundle is marked as substandard. It may contain bugs, not perform optimally or otherwise be in violation of the submission rules.
This is my first Skin ever! So I need help to improve it. :D

Updated 1.1:
Made him look more like an agent, yes I can see it needs fixing but I need more help as this is my first skin.

Keywords:
Kiddie, Agent, Kid, Villager, VillagerKid, Noob.
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VillagerKid.blp (Texture)

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13:56, 28th Aug 2009 67chrome: really like the idea, but the execution could definitely use some work. Looks like you did most of this on something like MS paint to. Its a good job for that program, but if you plan on submitting skins and finishing...
  1. 13:56, 28th Aug 2009
    67chrome: really like the idea, but the execution could definitely use some work. Looks like you did most of this on something like MS paint to. Its a good job for that program, but if you plan on submitting skins and finishing this one see if you can download gimp, I hear it is a free program similar to photoshop.
    Anyways, blend the shading more, make the cloth look more like cloth, the thing in the ear could stand to look more like the contraptions agents have in their ears, the mouth could use a lot more work, the mustache needs to be re-worked, and the sunglasses need to be fitted better, especially were they converge in the middle.
     
  2. expazatrix

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    ~Subscribing.
     
  3. supertoinkz

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    ROCK ON!
    i think you just recolored it and added the shades
    me thinks
     
  4. expazatrix

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    Yeah I did, but I need help on what else to change/add?
     
  5. supertoinkz

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    might want to freehand or else, fear to be rejected
    make the short pants to denim long pants
     
  6. breebree123

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    looks fine and great :D
    4/5
     
  7. expazatrix

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    Yeah Ok I will.
     
  8. Latecat

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    Hmm...how about
    A jacket.
    New trousers.
    A stylish hair remade.
    New boots.
    As in the texture*
     
  9. expazatrix

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    Updated, press F5.
     
  10. supertoinkz

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    okay, need more shine on the coat
    and remove beard, sucks :D
     
  11. expazatrix

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    He doesn't have a beard.
     
  12. supertoinkz

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    mustache
     
  13. expazatrix

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    Oh, why should I remove it?
     
  14. supertoinkz

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    Looks much better. GJ
    And tyvm for stealing my avatar -.- and shopping it by changing the eyes!
     
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    lol i dint noticed that well theres no copyright for that :p

    ontopic: wow nice idea! very original i give a 3/5 if you continue to update it ill give more ! :)

    Remove the mustache it dont fit the skin very well!
     
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    Heh, awesome idea, and looks nice.
     
  18. Alagremm

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    Looks awesome! Gnome agent!
     
  19. Misha

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    lol... this looks like kid Hitler X3

    anyway... it needs a LOT MORE shading and highlights, details, contrast and what not.

    Rating: 2.25/5 Lacking.

    ~Misha~