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(This is my 1st prologue for the upcoming,..... (Secret!) Since my friend is a bad reviewer, I need you to review it. )
..... It has been 200 days since that thing, that metal beast got out of our hands. As it has been shutdown, the terror of it caused still inside of every American's head. .....Exodar.... That name scared them. It was the first time that we know..... That we are not alone, in this world, or this universe. .......
May 26th, 2016, some where in Afrangistan, 10.46 A.M
"Alright gentlemen," Doug suddenly stop and saw Katherine. "and a lady, we have received an information that there are some terrorists outside our base, 5 kilometres and still getting closer. I need a team to repel their attacks. Volunteers?"
Nobody. Katherine looks around, trying to find a hand that put up. She talk to a guy who sit next to her:
-John, why don't you just raise your hand up, you love to fight with those bastards!
He still not rasing his hand up, instead of that he is chewing a bublegum. "Dismiss, I will talk about this later. " Doug said. Everybody got up, "not so fast Kat and John, I will need you two explain something."
"What the hell? I thought you two do the propaganda work!" Doug said with the angry face.
"They were too afraid sir, me and John couldn't do anything." "Now with you John, why the fu.." Doug camn his anger down."Why don't you raised your fucking hand up too encourage everybody!" " I thought you said I don't need to, sir." John finally talks something.
- Arghh! If only the Globex and that god damn creaature weren't exist, I don't have to do this job for about 7 months more! And those Retar-
He looks on his table, at the picture. It was his son, Lewis and his girlfriend, Sam. They are both 15, and he don't want to face the fact.....that they were sacrifice for the country when fighting that beast. He never thought that his son would died sooner than him. They have their entire life ahead them, and this is the end Doug don't want to face. "Get out of here, I need time alone."
(End of part 1)
..... It has been 200 days since that thing, that metal beast got out of our hands. As it has been shutdown, the terror of it caused still inside of every American's head. .....Exodar.... That name scared them. It was the first time that we know..... That we are not alone, in this world, or this universe. .......
May 26th, 2016, some where in Afrangistan, 10.46 A.M
"Alright gentlemen," Doug suddenly stop and saw Katherine. "and a lady, we have received an information that there are some terrorists outside our base, 5 kilometres and still getting closer. I need a team to repel their attacks. Volunteers?"
Nobody. Katherine looks around, trying to find a hand that put up. She talk to a guy who sit next to her:
-John, why don't you just raise your hand up, you love to fight with those bastards!
He still not rasing his hand up, instead of that he is chewing a bublegum. "Dismiss, I will talk about this later. " Doug said. Everybody got up, "not so fast Kat and John, I will need you two explain something."
"What the hell? I thought you two do the propaganda work!" Doug said with the angry face.
"They were too afraid sir, me and John couldn't do anything." "Now with you John, why the fu.." Doug camn his anger down."Why don't you raised your fucking hand up too encourage everybody!" " I thought you said I don't need to, sir." John finally talks something.
- Arghh! If only the Globex and that god damn creaature weren't exist, I don't have to do this job for about 7 months more! And those Retar-
He looks on his table, at the picture. It was his son, Lewis and his girlfriend, Sam. They are both 15, and he don't want to face the fact.....that they were sacrifice for the country when fighting that beast. He never thought that his son would died sooner than him. They have their entire life ahead them, and this is the end Doug don't want to face. "Get out of here, I need time alone."
(End of part 1)
