Stargate Galaxy Beta

[Moderator]

23:42, 25th Jun 2011
-Kobas-:
Status: Rejected
Comment

 

[-Kobas-]

Cool must check!

But simple terrain, small file size and bad map description don't tell much!
Will see >.>

 

[light bolt30]

A good campaign needs a good campaign and storyline, this does not.

 

[Darkzealot_128]

Gonna check, seems likely to not be approval-worthy though.

Edit: A protected campaign? Wth? Since I can't check it it is probably rejection material anyway. REJECTION

 

[Djokula]

-Kobas- I didnt had time to make bigs maps to dw some special terrain etc,but like i said ill improve that.

light bolt30-I cant make some special story,because like i said next year two Stargate movies are releasing,so I dont want to ruin/destroy original Stargate story with this campaign.

Darkzealot 128-As i said im still learning how to use editor.I still dont know many things but in time i will learn ofc.In site infos i saw that purpose of this site is to help ppl like me with suggestions,advices etc...

 

[-Kobas-]

Grrr 2 words:
Easy:

• I killed 50% enemy only with hero!

Unfinished:

• Hero abilities are very bad, at least change icon and description!
• Cinematic don't show any camera changes, try to zoom out/in, rotate and so on! Also cinematic transmissions from units are 2 long!
• Hero don't level up in first 3 missions!
• No custom loading screen!
• Terrain need improvement, download and import some space doodads and use them as walls and so on! http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/models.php?search=space&d=list&r=20&t=4 <- Example
  
• All this can be added into 1 map, campaign is there for 1 reason to show different loading screens, to reduce map size, and so on, it's more easier to create large number of maps instead of 1 large, but still your aren't so large!
• Add few optional quests!
• Add more different units!
• More events (sudden alien strike)
• Need a lot of special effects (from doodads to abilities)
• ...

 

[Djokula]

Thank you very much kobas ill improve/change what i can,and ill reupload because im preparing now chapter.

 

[phoenixfire]

Hmmm... doesn't seem like a very approval-worthy campaign...
In my opinion, the campaign can be improved in every aspect.

How long did it take you to make this? 3 weeks?
Campaigns usually take months to make, don't be afraid to spend a long time on them.

Also, despite the bad comments, don't give up. I recommend you read up on tutorials.

My Rating: 2/5

 

[Djokula]

Thank you for your support nuuh.I will improve everything i can,and its was more then 3 weeks,but like kobas said it is unfinished.

 

[ArneXis]

This campaign needs a lot of improvement, there are no items, no enemy variety (like 2), the cinematics are boring the terrain is bad and the maps aren't linked up. The hero has virtually no skills, on map 3 at the end cinematic when everybody stopped talking the map never finished, it just left me looking at the huge purple spaceship.

 

[Djokula]

Like i already said i cant add something new/special,that way i will ruin stargate story and that isnt my point,but i will try to improve what i can.

 

[Rafal]

bug: in the first map at the first cinematic "exlpore" i think it should be "explore"
triggering: its very simply 3/5
spells: 1 own spell 2/5
story: interesting + comprehensible 4/5
cinematic: how said bug found + very long 1/5

all in all: 3+2+4+1 = 10/20 = 2.5/5 = 3/5

 

[Djokula]

I will fix that because soon ill reupload anyway.

 

[Mechanical Man]

How long did it take you to make this? 3 weeks?
Campaigns usually take months to make, don't be afraid to spend a long time on them.

A four mission campaign can be easily done in 3 weeks if the missions aren't very complex, you are not slacking and you have experience with world editor.

 

[phoenixfire]

Well-thought out campaigns with great terrain, balanced races, custom spells, events, etc. will usually take more then 3 weeks.

 

[Djokula]

Ye i know nuuh.In few days ill reupload it anyway i think it will be little better.

 

[phoenixfire]

Wasn't exactly talking to you, as much as correcting Mechanical Man, but it applies to you

 

[MagiC_AntO.]

continue to work ,read tutoriels ( on this site) try to import new models , doodads , ect ...

 

[Kiamati]

I agree with the above comments. The core of the campaign is clearly there, but you DO need to improve the following sections:

- Spells, powers, items: add a lot more, you may come up with good ideas looking at other space warfare maps (especially WH40K ones).

- Terrain: it's basically the size of a mini map. Not even close to sufficient

- Creeps: add more variety and types.

- Dialogues: check the grammar, you may wish to ask a native speaker to proofread them. (on the top, make cinematics skippable)

That's it for now, I'll submit a vote when this map is in later stages of its development.

 

[TDA]

Djokula I understand you completly I've jus been doing Warcraft 3 maps for 1 year.

I started With the project that wich would prove to be my favorite over all this time

the most important thing I found about learning the editor, is a gradual aproach

This is how I did it: I was a Novice at the less complicated map making of starcraft 1 when I started, so I had basic knolage.
Then I learned the old Warcraft 3 editor (Rain of Chaios) this gave me way less to worck with then what I use now (Frosen throne) but eased my transition, cause when I got the FT editor I was mesemorised

Don't take it in all at once.

The 3 first things your need to learn are the Cinematic, unit, and Camera Trigers, inorder to have a sound concept map, which is what novices do, because only one eyear from now will you be able to do what I'm doing now, upedating every single thing about the map, untill it all has the epic feel

 

[Ironside]

Grrr 2 words:
Easy:

• I killed 50% enemy only with hero!

Unfinished:

• Hero abilities are very bad, at least change icon and description!
• Cinematic don't show any camera changes, try to zoom out/in, rotate and so on! Also cinematic transmissions from units are 2 long!
• Hero don't level up in first 3 missions!
• No custom loading screen!
• Terrain need improvement, download and import some space doodads and use them as walls and so on! http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/models.php?search=space&d=list&r=20&t=4 <- Example
  
• All this can be added into 1 map, campaign is there for 1 reason to show different loading screens, to reduce map size, and so on, it's more easier to create large number of maps instead of 1 large, but still your aren't so large!
• Add few optional quests!
• Add more different units!
• More events (sudden alien strike)
• Need a lot of special effects (from doodads to abilities)
• ...

When I found similar results from checking the map, I'm voting for rejection.
Since you made a review already I'll just mark yours, but my vote is rejection.



Rating: 1.5/5
Vote for: Rejected