[Trigger] Spell help

[noob134]

I just made my first spell and i want to know things i could do to improve it before i submit it to spell section. Also, i would like to know if there is any other spell extremely similar to it. You can also post any ideas, criticism or suggestions
*i got the idea from looking at the Tranquility icon
Spell- Thor's Wrath
Description- Thor Summons a lightning storm upon his enemies that unleashes waves of lightning dealing damage for 50 seconds
Level 1- 75 damage per lightning strike
Level 2- 150 damage per lightning strike
Level 3- 225 damage per lightning strike
**spell is attached to this post

 

[ap0calypse]

I like the spell, I don't think I've seen it somewhere else...
You should make it MUI (only 1 unit can cast it at the same time atm).
For the rest: the description and terrain could be improved (it will look better).

Leakless, it works (for 1 unit), I wouldn't know how to improve the special effects (maybe add a little special effect on impact, but it isn't necessary), good job for your first spell.

 

[noob134]

You should make it MUI (only 1 unit can cast it at the same time atm).

How do i make it MUI?

Also, i have i problem, in my unit groups they keep selecting corpses. But when i try using the condition Unit is Alive equal to True it doesnt work and Also real life of triggering unit is greater than or equal to 1 but for some reason the dummy units wont cast their spell on anything.

 

[ap0calypse]

Since I'm rather lazy and explaining it myself would take too long, here a tutorial: MUI Spellmaking Tutorial.

About the dead units:
Try "((Triggering unit) has buff Death And Decay (Effect)) Equal to True"
and: "((Triggering unit) has buff Hero Dissipate (Effect)) Equal to True"
Use them in an "Or multiple conditions" of course.

(Note that these conditions are just tests, I have no idea whether they work or not, I've never used them like this before).

 

[noob134]

Since I'm rather lazy and explaining it myself would take too long, here a tutorial: MUI Spellmaking Tutorial.

The only way i see i can make it MUI since i do not know any JASS execpt for removing leaks is make all the units spawn at once, which would kind of defeat the purpose of this spell. I read up on it and it said you cannot have an MUI spell with waits.
Also, i would like to know if you think this spell is worthy of approval in spell section.
Thanks,
noob134

 

[Reaper2008]

Not mui, but make it MPI by using arrays. Also, the IsUnitDead() works just fine in a few of my triggers, dunno what's going on. (didn't dl or see, no WC3 in my netbook)

 

[ap0calypse]

Not mui, but make it MPI by using arrays. Also, the IsUnitDead() works just fine in a few of my triggers, dunno what's going on. (didn't dl or see, no WC3 in my netbook)

As far as I know, it's already MPI :s (he used the array "player number", so there wouldn't be a problem there).

I'm not really up-to-date with the spells in the spell section, but I think it has a real chance to get approved if you get everything to work.
MPI should be enough, yeah... it's still a good spell for RPG's, hero arena's and other maps where you only have 1 unit (hero).

 

[noob134]

I made some changes to the spell and it is now uploaded on spell's section go check it out!

 

[Dark_Moon]

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