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Vengeancekael -
Date: 2012/May/09 20:00:52

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[Newbie100]

Update It really Works.

 

[sonofjay]

Is this really a melee? Since I open it and all the triggers are for melee.

Even I'm confused I'll still review this

Bad:

• The map is very small and the two players can attack each other very easily and and if someone uses night elf, he can be easily defeated since wisp cannot attack.
• Flat, empty and asymmetric terrain.
• Creeps only dropped one item
• Also set the neutral creeps target acquisition range to camp

Good:

• I can't see one at the moment

Suggestions:

• Use the height tools on terraining
• Also use more environment and prop doodads
• Try to make a balance terrain(if this is really a melee map
• Make set item drops instead of one item

My rating is 1/5. Overall this is a poorly made map, look for tutorials that you think can help you on creating maps

If you have any complaints or want me to review it again PM or VM me. I will only review it again if I see major changes.

OTHER NOTES: Try to looks on blizzard melees or custom melees here on hive, we have a lot of good melees that you can study.

 

[Newbie100]

Er,Sorry I'am just a Newbie.Even a small map takes me 5 days I'am soo very sorry I will work over again,I will try.

 

[sonofjay]

Don't worry you did better than me when we will compare mine and your first map , but if you practice a lot and give more dedication you can create more beautiful melee maps than me.

 

[Newbie100]

O can you teach me on how to write a BB writing mode with Fonts size,Font color and etc.
But thank you for examining it I promised I will worked over.

THANK YOU.

One More thing.Do you like all the Hero Description that I edit?

 

[sonofjay]

First of all you can just edit your post, don't double post >:C. hehehe,

And here is the link for the BB Codes.

And the new hero description is nice, but its not really necessary for a melee map. XD I think the hero description is the part where you take a long time to edit.


And just keep working on it, +rep for you

 

[Newbie100]

Thank you for the comment.Just I will upload a new map here changing all the settings.Thank you,Your the first one that approved my work.Good luck for more projects you create.