Skeleton acolyte222.blp

[Moderator]

17:13, 19th Aug 2008
Dan van Ohllus:
Not enough changes to become approved. At least 75% changes has to be done (most freehand).
Plus the knife and skull awfully lack shading and defintion.

I suggest you to take a look here and here and learn to improve.

You have 10 days to improve the textures. If I see no changes then, the skin will be rejected.

Edit:
[Rejected]
10 days has went, and still no changes.

 

[FrIkY]

As I can see you changed 2 things: changed dagger to look like crap and face does not really look like ''detailed'' and the rest of the skin isn't changed at all?

Like first, read the rules before you post a skin, icon or anything... it says ''A skin must be modified at least 75% from the original in order to to be approved.''
I think this is maybe 10% modification, so it won't get approved

1/5 - please do more work on this skin

 

[pyropk95]

alls you did was face, and the pointless and un-seeable dagger in-game

 

[Misha]

EL REJECTO! because you're not trying hard enough.
try first drawing everything by your own hand on a piece of paper and then yo can even scan and CnP that (freehanded CnP, funny ^_^)

 

[Hawkwing]

Not enough changes, and the changes you have made are lacking contrast and detail.

 

[Lord_Firage]

Recoloured Face ...
The Dagger is too simple .. are there any other Changes...

 

[FrIkY]

Recoloured Face ...

Eh? Recolored? How?

 

[Lord_Firage]

Okay .. Im wrong .. the Face is no Recolour ...
Sorry >_<
But it need more Shading & Highlights

 

[Redeemer59]

The dagger looks like it's made out of cardboard.

 

[Grog50]

Ha! detailed face...Sure thing bud
1/5 put like 26times as much effort into the next one and you might get somewhere

 

[Rajin71506]

Hey Redeemer...i use a cardboard dagger. Lol...detailed face. I could see a good skin coming from this idea but....that's not it

 

[madcat2]

Good start, but you can do a lot more work on this buddy.

 

[miksike]

sucky skin....

 

[Zeverens]

I love the woden dagger! (Not )
Dagger: Well, Was it meant to look like rust?
Head; Did you draw it with chalks?
Well, well, you better check out some skinning tutorials, Sorry 'mate' but this is not good. =/

 

[Sergeant Ray]

The only thing you changed was what the user really dosn't see in the game. If you want to make a difference, Rip up the robe and expose his skeletal body. maby change the colors around a little. Get rid of the hood maby.

 

[Misha]

The only thing you changed was what the user really dosn't see in the game. If you want to make a difference, Rip up the robe and expose his skeletal body. maby change the colors around a little. Get rid of the hood maby.

BAD SUGGESTION SARGE.... that will make no sense and will look very ugly
the acolyte mdl has no legs and no head. only the face.

 

[Sergeant Ray]

BAD SUGGESTION SARGE.... that will make no sense and will look very ugly
the acolyte mdl has no legs and no head. only the face.

If you don't know this, the acolyte's body in the model maker is just a cone. No holo parts. You arn't seeing feet or a body b/c that is how the texture is drawn. Following my suggest is only a matter of proper recoloring.

 

[Hawkwing]

Unfortunately, if you alpha out areas of the hood or robe you will be able to see inside his head / nothingness under his robe. What Misha says is correct.

 

[Sergeant Ray]

Unfortunately, if you alpha out areas of the hood or robe you will be able to see inside his head / nothingness under his robe. What Misha says is correct.

I never had that problem. Then again I didn't edit the entire thing. Are you talking like seeing through the texture?

 

[Misha]

I never had that problem. Then again I didn't edit the entire thing. Are you talking like seeing through the texture?

No Sarge, you get nasty holes all over him

seen my new avatar?

 

[Sergeant Ray]

No Sarge, you get nasty holes all over him

seen my new avatar?

blp adds alpha channels, why wouldn't it work?

Yeah, I noticed your avater Misha. Did you make it yourself?

 

[Misha]

Yeah, I noticed your avater Misha. Did you make it yourself?

yeah ^_^

 

[smoopa]

It looks like the acolyte's head fell in a pudding cup

 

[Sergeant Ray]

It looks like the acolyte's head fell in a pudding cup

What? Dude, no. Make a comment worth our time.

I still think that the texture could be recolored if any thing.

 

[qqluqq]

a detailed skull wtfh are you talking about

and please dont post crap here

 

[Hawkwing]

a detailed skull wtfh are you talking about

and please dont post crap here

Everyone has to start somewhere. They can post what they want, but they have to understand that it may get rejected. This is a good way to get advice on how to improve, you have to understand that.

 

[qqluqq]

Everyone has to start somewhere. They can post what they want, but they have to understand that it may get rejected. This is a good way to get advice on how to improve, you have to understand that.

duh but they dont need to post there first skin here
they should wait for posting until they have a good skin

 

[Hawkwing]

Yes, they should. But people are free to do as they want as long as they understand the consequences.

Now lets get back on topic.

 

[Sergeant Ray]

Yes, they should. But people are free to do as they want as long as they understand the consequences.

Now lets get back on topic.

Any modeler/skinner will tell you you shouldn't post your first design. With that said, I will respect your wishes, and move on topic. Maby if you completely remaid the model of the acolyte, and skinned as I suggested, you wouldn't have this Alpha problem?

 

[Hawkwing]

My point was he dosen't have to be so abrupt.

 

[Misha]

My point was he dosen't have to be so abrupt.

This is not very good >_< Yo got 5 days to some more work or it's EL REJECTO

That's all i have to say

 

[ike_ike]

Poor guy was abused by idiots who probably can't skin any better than he can. D:

As consolation, the face looks alright from a distance. Albeit a bit blurry. More definition on the face!

Offtopic: I posted my first skin here. Ooooh shit, the memory burns.