Protoss Demo 1.2

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17:05, 10th Mar 2014
Hell_Master: See through Shadow Fury's review and eubz's as well:

What kind of awful map is this? I'm really sorry but this is a very bad map! These are all reasons:-

- Completely flat terrain, not even ONE doodad and two tiles used only
- No appropriate sounds for ALL units. E.g Colossus is a robot and it has the sound or Mortar Team. Mutalisk is a flying hydralisk and it has the sound of Dragonhawk Rider
- No fitting description and icons to ALL units
- Some units, when I click them, do not display properly their camera image. E.g Dragoon/Zealote, Marine...
- Backpack requires Arcane Vault but Peasants cannot build it
- Only two buildings can be constructed by Peasants?
- No fun, very boring map
- The description itself is terrible! It doesn't give any info on the map and doesn't have a credits list

SUGGESTIONS:-
- Read a lot of tutorials!
- Post your maps in http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/map-development-202/ before uploading another one. There, you'll receive more help and constructive criticism

All in all, this is a very horrible map and offers no fun so I give this 0.5/5 and vote for SURE REJECTION!

Please, do fix the description.

What's in this game? I see you give this "type: mini-game" and so I looked for triggers and what I found is the default melee init. This map just shows models created by we-don't-know-who. If you want to submit something like this be sure to add who created those models and delete the default melee init. This is somewhat like a template.

This should be rejected. 1/5

As for mine, it looks too unfinished and simple to be approved. Direct this to the Map Development for it's improvements. Rejected!

 

[Shadow Fury]

What kind of awful map is this? I'm really sorry but this is a very bad map! These are all reasons:-

- Completely flat terrain, not even ONE doodad and two tiles used only
- No appropriate sounds for ALL units. E.g Colossus is a robot and it has the sound or Mortar Team. Mutalisk is a flying hydralisk and it has the sound of Dragonhawk Rider
- No fitting description and icons to ALL units
- Some units, when I click them, do not display properly their camera image. E.g Dragoon/Zealote, Marine...
- Backpack requires Arcane Vault but Peasants cannot build it
- Only two buildings can be constructed by Peasants?
- No fun, very boring map
- The description itself is terrible! It doesn't give any info on the map and doesn't have a credits list

SUGGESTIONS:-
- Read a lot of tutorials!
- Post your maps in http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/map-development-202/ before uploading another one. There, you'll receive more help and constructive criticism

All in all, this is a very horrible map and offers no fun so I give this 0.5/5 and vote for SURE REJECTION!

 

[eubz]

Please, do fix the description.

What's in this game? I see you give this "type: mini-game" and so I looked for triggers and what I found is the default melee init. This map just shows models created by we-don't-know-who. If you want to submit something like this be sure to add who created those models and delete the default melee init. This is somewhat like a template.

This should be rejected. 1/5