[Aeon of Strife] Pimps VS Bitches.. Yup

[Jackhamme]

Map Name - Pimps VS Bitches v1.2
Creator - Jackhamme

This map is based on the AoS structure were 4 players (2v2) battle each other to defeat the enemy's team and main base. This map isn't meant to be taken seriously and is short and quick.

There are 6 different heroes, 3 Pimp heroes and 3 Bitch heroes. Each with their own unique spell (4 spells per hero). There is jungle creeps and 2 bosses that are difficult to kill, but if you do you have the chance of getting the Mask Of Death or Ank of Reincarnation. After one of the teams loses their second tower a siege weapon will start to spawn per wave called the Tower Destroyer.

Credits

PeeKay for the Ready For Anything and Special Poison icons.
This is where I got the Powerful Punch Icon from. http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/icons-541/btninv_misc_ale_01-a-55202/?prev=search%3Dale%26d%3Dlist%26r%3D20/.
KelThuzad for the Stop icon.
kola for the Inner Rage icon.
NFWar for the Encouragement and The Good Spot icons.
wuddle for the Annoying Bitch Aura icon.
4eNNightmare for the Complain icon.
Callahan for the Powerful Punch Bottle Model.

On a side note

There is a lot of sexual innuendos and stereotyping. The names of the Heroes in the game have no relevance to anyone I know or once knew. None of the stereotyping and what not are accurate to my beliefs and opinions. Instead they are just there for entertainment and comedic purposes.

URL to the map

http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/maps-564/pimps-vs-bitches-v-1-2-a-229065/

The reason why I have put my map up here is to ask how could I improve this a little more? I have been told the items need to me more interesting and unique (which I will be doing) but apart from that what else could I do?

Thanks for your time.

 

[Jackhamme]

Anyone have some ideas?

 

[sonofjay]

I think the reason why no one is trying this is because of its title, I mean who wants to see pimps beating up bitches right? Its a little bit disturbing but you can at least lure people to play it if you'll try to elaborate what your map features and show one or two screenshots.

 

[Jackhamme]

lmao, the title is quite hilarious but its not Pimps beating up bitches, its visversa ;D.

I have left a link to the map where screen shots are shown but I'll put some on here too

 

[nedio95]

I don't know if it's an issue but there is another map named Pimp vs. Bitches and it's a castle defence.

spoiler

The pimp(npc) tries to destroy the brothel and players have to defend it. I find it realy amusing and fun to play. It's pretty well balanced and needs a lot of teamwork.

Otherwise will try your map now and give a proper review.


Edit//

review

-Jungling too easy

There is jungle creeps and 2 bosses that are difficult to kill

Serriously ? There were only two sasquatches who gave me some problems. I assume they are the bosses you mention.

-No custom items or recipies. Items too cheap. Was fully equiped before destroying the second tower. (With 3 of the +25 claws)

-some triggering

this

• If (All Conditions are True) then do (Then Actions) else do (Else Actions)
  • If - Conditions
    • Or - Any (Conditions) are true
      • Conditions
        • SS_Number Equal to 1
        • SS_Number Equal to 2
        • SS_Number Equal to 3
        • SS_Number Equal to 4
        • SS_Number Equal to 5
        • SS_Number Equal to 6
        • SS_Number Equal to 7
  • Then - Actions
    • Unit - Reset ability cooldowns for (Casting unit)
    • Set SS_Number = 0
  • Else - Actions
    • Set SS_Number = 0

becomes this

• If (All Conditions are True) then do (Then Actions) else do (Else Actions)
  • If - Conditions
    • SS_Number Less than 8
  • Then - Actions
    • Unit - Reset ability cooldowns for (Triggering unit)
    • Set SS_Number = 0
  • Else - Actions
    • Set SS_Number = 0

The wave spawning triggers can be reduced to just a few lines.

The hero reviving trigger can be reduced to just a few lines.

Other minnor issues as storing the triggering unit in variable to reduce calls
and Casting unit >> Triggering unit

-Only 1 leak found gj.

• Lady Slower
  • Events
    • Time - Every 0.03 seconds of game time
  • Conditions
  • Actions
    • Unit Group - Pick every unit in (Units in (Playable map area)) and do (Actions)
      • Loop - Actions
        • If (All Conditions are True) then do (Then Actions) else do (Else Actions)
          • If - Conditions
            • ((Picked unit) has buff Lady Slower ) Equal to True
          • Then - Actions
            • Unit - Add Lady Slower Effect to (Picked unit)
            • Unit - Set level of Lady Slower Effect for (Picked unit) to 2
          • Else - Actions
            • Unit - Set level of Lady Slower Effect for (Picked unit) to 1

Just add this before the creation of the unit group

• Custom script: set bj_wantDestroyGroup = true

-There are a few regions which aren't used for anything. Planning something ?

-Towers kinda die too easy and don't provide much of a threat.

-Orgasmic lightnings tt says 10% of target hp but in the damage formula it's 7%.

Will review more detailed tomorrow. Now >> Bed

Edit2//
-More heroes. Double the current number would be good.

-Because its a 2v2 map you could increase the need of teamwork. Like making some of the heroes synergy with each other.