PasQual's Cinemaics

[Moderator]

22:23, 20th Oct 2009
ap0calypse: Rejected

Violates the map submission rules (quality is too low, bad description).

 

[Narrat0r]

Sorry to say this, but:
Cinematics are horrible quality.
Pointless terrain, hopeless design, e.t.c....
I just wat to say that you should improve a LOT before you can count of approval of these...

 

[Vengeancekael]

Hmm Narrator seems to be really disappointed, so if you think you need more help, then just check out my cinematics, especially Part 3 because ive put alot if tips in the triggers.
I will check this now^^
And also, IMPROVE the description, tell us something about the story etc.
Alright what is this?:"This si my firs group of cinamaics.Enjoy!"????????????????????
Edit:Im done watching the first 20 seconds of the first cinematic and heres my review:
I dont really have anything to say except.......SEPTIMUS can you come over here for a moment?!
I would suggest you read some tutorials first-.- and then start your project in the development forum.

 

[T3rm1n4tor]

Well...

Some facts:
You really need to learn to "write" better or have a look on it later.
Examples:
- This si my firs group of cinemaics. So Enjoy!
- PasQual's Cinemaics
- wose (2 Times!) I think you ment =was=
- Husband (Well you just forgot a letter)

The Terrain:
First Map: - It was really bad
Second Map: - It was a bit better
Third Map: - Between bad and okay

I see you took time with the Special Effects, they weren't so bad.

There were some real funny parts =) +

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It was your first Cinematic! My first was worse than yours
Just don't stop making Cinematics! 3/5!

 

[Septimus]

Poor triggering, poor terrain with 0 of tiles variation, no fog, poor camera setup, horribly long dialog (I was wondering what the hell it took soo long just to say 2 word "Yeah! Ok".

I do not have any mood to comment about it, the description at this site does not even worth a dime to be comment about.

Please read the submission rules before submitting it right away.

 

[Vengeancekael]

OMG my septimus call actually worked^^
And check these tutorials first:
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2
3
4

 

[ap0calypse]

It seems Septimus already said everything needed to say...
I was too lazy to answer the call, but okay... you really need to work on your triggering.
As vengeance already said, check those tutorials... they can really help you!

Rejected.

 

[Bugbuster96]

First of all, why the f*** are they fighting in the 1st cinematic?! Killing themselves for fun?!
Second, i think u forgot the sheep in 3rd cinematic
Third, i agree with T3rm1n4tor, several typos.
Last, when i watched the 1st cinematic, it was so boooring. Make more Camera moves, make better tarrain and don't make some flat grass outside the cliffs.
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If this is really your first cine/campaign ... i will give you a 3/5
Don't stop making cinematics and read some tuts about terraining...