My First Terrain

[Samlag]

My First Terrain.

Please comment.
Picture 1:

Picture 2:

 

[The_Grapist]

Overall a nice terrain with beginners flaw,
not something special but an good beginners terrain.

Work hard and be creative,
and you will raise your self to the top...
For some encouragement here is an +REP.

 

[~Void~]

Overall a nice terrain with beginners flaw,
not something special but an good beginners terrain.

Work hard and be creative,
and you will raise your self to the top...
For some encouragement here is an +REP.

He's global ignored, but I figured I'd quote this post so you could see it because it's not completely useless.

 

[Megafyr]

I see alot of doodads floating. Ctrl + Page Up/Page Down while selecting a doodad will change their flying height. Also take a look at http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/terrain-board-267/the-ultimate-terraining-map-3-0-a-45316/. This map contains alot more models than the original ones that come with warcraft III which is very useful for terraining.

Here's a +rep.

 

[Gost]

The first one: Really bare in the foreground, and don't use canopy trees when taking a pic from a side angle =p it ends up looking horrible. The path could use a little bit more tile variation. The sky and fog don't match, ick.

Second one: The terrain in itself is a lot better, but you used those nasty canopy trees agian, and the fog/sky clash is really ruining it =/.