My first terrain try

[Boombladoom]

This is my first try for some terrain i made in like 30 mins. I'm not too good but i wanna make progress.Tell me what you think and some suggestions please.
This uses some fog/shadows:
http://tinypic.com/view.php?pic=tafo5l&s=7
This is without fog/shadows:
http://tinypic.com/view.php?pic=2qxnhi1&s=7


Anyhow this was made without any imported stuff.
And thanks for the time spent reading this post.

 

[fladdermasken]

Firstly, upload the images here instead of linking.

Secondly, I don't see any use of fog in neither of your pictures.
Quite frankly, the only thing that slightly varies is the angle.

Anyways, it's not without hope but I do recommend you learn some terraining 101's: http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/...e-terraining-hives-terraining-section-184427/

 

[Boombladoom]

Man thank you for that tutorial i'll read it right now but i wanna ask,how do i upload images here?

 

[takakenji]

you need to scale and rotate your things -.-

 

[dragonafv]

Hmm, the only thing that I like there is the castle...if I could rate it i would give it 3/5. Keep continue terraining and you'll succeed.

 

[dragonafv]

What do you say guys about my terrain? I want to participate with this in The Picture contest. Does it look good?

 

[Racziel]

What do you say guys about my terrain? I want to participate with this in The Picture contest. Does it look good?

First:
If u want to get a good feedback you should make an own thread for your pics.
Second:
U should think about how doodads match together, cause for me they mostly didn't fit at all. Its easier to find one theme (for example snow) and use models which realy fit in this theme. In your pic its more like an mixed up thing.
Furthermore u should pitch trees if they're on a mountainside and easy to identificate or make them look "solid standing". Like u did it it looks more like they were floating.

 

[dragonafv]

Thanks for your suggestions. I will try make my edit much better. Thanks again.

Best regards, dragonafv

 

[Boombladoom]

What do you say guys about my terrain? I want to participate with this in The Picture contest. Does it look good?

If you want to participate with it to a contest why you post here and not there?