My first skin ( comments and help)

[username10]

my first skin, a demon hunter as ninja.
( technically 3rd skin, because first 2 are recolors )

i was wondering what people thought of it.
( ignore weapon... not done with the weapon or the panda symbol )

i need some help with face, its not looking good.

the images include skin, model and portrait

 

[Kuhneghetz]

I only get "Invalid Attachment specified. If you followed a valid link, please notify the administrator" when I click on the links.

Maybe you should edit your post and upload the images from there.

 

[username10]

Sorry, i will re-post them now.


EDIT :

It's quite hard to see and absolutely colourless.

okay Hawkwing i will get a better view ( 2x normal size )

 

[Hawkwing]

It's quite hard to see and absolutely colourless.

 

[THE_END]

Well its freehand..thank God
And the whole skin has been drawn over..thank God TWICE!
However..there is no shading, it's very blurry and there's no details in general
Go check out some tutorials

 

[Hawkwing]

I do see shading. But very simple shading. The highlights need to be really visible. Also, it's lacking any detail or significant design. Try getting more creative, instead of Illidan with a black torso.

 

[username10]

okay

 

[Sabelion]

I think you coud just make the face mask black, It looks kinda weird because the face mask shoudnt turn gray..but very good as a third overall..

You shoud be proud...everybody gets very much critique on their first skin...I think Hawkwing ne-rep me so now I kinda quited submiting sense they say I suck hard.

Keep up the good work man.

 

[username10]

thanks Sabelion

i see what you mean, and the mask wasn't supposed to be gray, just black and lighter black ( because i thought plain black wasn't enough)

i am working on the skin now

thanks, the main point was to make it as best i could, and your comments helped thanks

EDIT : Here is the new ninja, sorry the hand is messed up

 

[Hawkwing]

You shoud be proud...everybody gets very much critique on their first skin...I think Hawkwing ne-rep me so now I kinda quited submiting sense they say I suck hard.

I never gave you negative reputation, but you did from another moderator for breaking the rules multiple times.

EDIT : Here is the new ninja, sorry the hand is messed up

Looks better, but the skin colour is still a bit too brown and saturated. Also, the arms need stronger shadows and highlights. Otherwise this is coming along fairly well. Keep it up. For a first skin this is great.

 

[Elfsilver Lord]

Actually, it looks sorta alright. Id add in some easy highlights and stuff (I personally airbrush mine). What program are you using?

 

[FrIkY]

It looks very messy and blurry, and it's missing highlights and shading... But what I really like are the bandages that are on arms

What you have to do to make your skin look better:
1. Make it smoother, you can try with Smudge tool.
2. You need to add highlights, you can do it with Dodge tool, or just using Brush
3. Fix the eyes, they're... bad

 

[~Void~]

Decent but a bit messy.

 

[Sabelion]

I never gave you negative reputation, but you did from another moderator for breaking the rules multiple times.

Ok thanks you man but I am still afraid of your comments and thats the main reason why I dont post my work here .

but I understand, that as a moderator you must be honest. So I dont think you are bad or something.

 

[Oziris]

looks kidna cool! i hope u make the skin.