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My Assassin Skin

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I would like to know what do you think about this skin?

- What could be improved?
- What should not be done?
- What is done well?
- Good
- Bad

http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/skins-552/assassinfinal-blp-208190/

The skin in link above.

Please reply to this post. :)

21:50, 7th Dec 2011
shiiK: Just attaching previews because the skin is rejected and should not show for normal users:
skins_4853_preview.jpg

skins_4853_screenshot.jpg
 
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Good concept. Bad execution.

1. You need ripples in the clothing so it looks like a cloak.
2. The parts of the clothing that are armor? Such as the knee area need to be shinier, and have scratches and wear on them.
3. Need more shading and highlights x10.
4. Made me think of Scarlet Crusade.

Keep working, you'll get better.
 
What is bad:

1.The clothing lacks of shadows\highlights.
2.Weapon is not changed.
3.The eyes are ugly.
4.The hair is alphaed.

What is good:

1.Nice idea!
2.Have enough freehand i think.
3.I like the shading\highlighting on her face.
4.Her lips are cool!

3\5 for now.
 
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What kind of assassin would run around in a bright shiney red armor? Assassins need to melt into the sorrounding shadows.
 
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