Okay, lemme go through those screenshots one at a time...
- Ooo, a green square for an icon? How snazzy. And I just love how your hero is called "Default string".
- What's up with his buff? Why are you using the texture that's part of the Voodoo ability model?
- Okay, tinting that portal black looks HORRIBLE.
- I can see that you're trying to go for "scary and powerful", but making it scaled to 20 times just makes it look stupid. Also you've got another green square there. And what's up with that big flat thing in the background?
- Again, don't use part of a ability model for an icon. And that's a very... interesting use of that Death Bolt model. It looks cheap though.
- Why is the tree half way through the house?
- Power lines don't go through windows and walls like that.
- Street lights aren't that big. A nd what's with the scorch marks everywhere?
- People don't just have corpses sitting in the road like that. And why is there a sudden forest of bushes?
- Okay, the purple fade filter has GOT to go. And what's with the gigantic grunt? It doesn't make it look powerful, it just makes it look ridiculous.
- Everything that's wrong I've already said.
- Random sand place? The fuck? Also, what's with the black icon?
- See #11.
If you wanted a black portal model, you could've requested that. Because right now it looks bad.
Pyritie is just trying to get you over that hill between an ok map and a good map, so just try to chill man.
There are some, not to be offensive or that I think I'm better in any way, noobISH things that you can see in the map.
Although, I do thank you for being a member that is requested that has more than 15% of their map complete.
What he meant about the grunt was that HUGE units in games can get annoying and look dumb to some. I just find that they're annoying if you're trying to select another unit and some huge unit is in the way of that.
Edit: by the way, where could I find those models?
Those all look like the models my friend zodd said someone made for him O-o, you wouldn't happen to be zodd's legendary modeler would you XD?
Edit: Nevermind I asked that question, *just realized if you're looking for someone to make a model it probably isn't you that made those XD, my bad.*
Both the grunt and the earth elemental thing.wich model do you mean the grunt?
No it doesn't. It needs LOTS of work.The map looks amazing.
If you know all the names of these things, then yes, you're definitely a fanboi.As someone who loves bleach (i'm not a fanboy)
No, that's just a n00b requester.A fanboy is someone who goes around asking everyone who is on this site for models for some godforsaken map that will never go anywhere.
Yes.If I said I watch South Park and that I love Mr. Hanky does that make me a fanboy? no.
Yes, anime seems to have the most fanboys. But going around with armbands is more than just a fanboy. That's being more like an obsessed fanboy.Fanboys are primarily related to people who like the anime Naruto. I hate those people more than anything. The ones who go around with the stupid arm band or bandanna on. I think it's ridiculously stupid.
The map looks amazing. There are some things that need to be fixed but as you're not done there's no reason for anyone to say it looks bad.
As someone who loves bleach (i'm not a fanboy) I knew exactly who the giant Grunt was (I believe it's Jidanbou, correct?) and who the Sand Guardian was (the Guardian of Hueco Mundo, i forget his name).
It looks really good for the intended audience, just the little things that you already know about.
As per the Grimmjow Resurrection form, I would think that the White Balverine model by Dan Van Ohllus (http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/resource.php?t=50362&prev=s%3Dwolf%26d%3Dlist%26r%3D20) would work until you got an actual model for him
I'm currently working on a Anime hero Line war and that was what I was going to do until I was far enough along with the map that requesting seemed prudent.
On a Side note, Where'd you get that Byakuya model!?!? He's my favorite anime character and I would probably give my arm to have it
But that's exactly his point. If his map is in a beginning developing stage, he shouldn't be requesting models yet.But there's no need to shoot down something just because you don't like the certain genre it's in.. especially when it's still in the development stage.
I know, you're both right, if it's still in the development stage you shouldn't be requesting. I'm not going to request for my map (unless someone is willing to give them, or they are already here) until i'm done 90-100% with terrain triggers and abilities.
Models don't make the map, it's just for effect. His map obviously needs a lot of work, but so do most wc3 maps nowadays.
And I pointed out that the White Balverine model by DvO works just as well in the map. I wasn't trying to shoot Pyritie down or anything malicious like that.